(daily1)Today is thursday.In the morning ,I awaked up early .After a quick shower ,I left my bedroom with singing my favorite songs .while looking at the blue sky ,I wonder if I was a bird which can fly in the sky freely .With the natural imagination,I came into my classroom step by step.As you know I like free life and also I’m a slow character.During the day I want to know rapidly ,why do we have so many rules in our surrounding .Our parents only know that we should do homework and study again and again .But dear parents I want to tell you ,I find it important for us to do something interesting .Can you give us some free space .can you put yourself in our place .I know it is a virtue to study calmly and wisely ,and I will also work hard .Please give us a blue and free sky .We want to become a happy bird to go through a enjoy journey .
(daily2)I’ve got to say .This is a warm day .Hello ,today is Wednesday .Wow ,I’m studying ,but I’m also do my interesting thing –writing journal .It doesn’t matter .Maybe ever I don’t like English but now I’m taking interests in English .I burst into thought that writing English is a happy thing .I really want to study English well .As we all know ,we are going through the Mid-autumn Festival ,so there is no doubt that we are being a several days for free .Ha ,such a thing for me is happy but the same time ,I’m also a litter afraid that I should do something that students should do .I must do less plays and more practice .Walking in the busy street ,there were some bargains ,such as beautiful clothes ,interesting CDs fresh flowers and so on .I wonder if it is because I haven’t be able to be outdoors for so long that I’ve grown so crazy about everything to do with sociation .With this thought ,I come into my home .The world is beautiful ,when I get into university ,after that ,I graduated I’m sure I can be outdoors for so long to learn something interesting .
真的想提高英语写作水平，急切，，
完全是我自己课后写的，没有在线翻译哦谢谢赐教啊
可是我认为你帮我改的都是我比较喜欢的句式啊，而且都是比较出彩的句式啊，比如With，，，，是伴随，While，，，是进行，，Iwonder，，，就比thought要好，，
自己写的百分之百额，写的有这么烂吗？撒谎的话天打雷劈额