麻烦大家帮我看下此话英语翻译是否有错？

Question

 设计师要提高的方法是让模特衣服变得时尚。let model's clothes became modern is who stylist needs heighten of mode

Answer 1

典型的按照中文顺序翻译出来的中式英语

the way that( in which ) designers should improve is that to make model's clothes became fashion本回答被提问者和网友采纳

Answer 2

没错

Answer 3

the stylist had better develop the method of making model's clothes more fashion.

Answer 4

小小建议时尚可以用fashion

Answer 5

中式英语