yvonne yung对不对错了不是这个不是这个

Question

请帮我看看这篇短文有没有不对之处
Ted was a wealthy,lonely widower who had two children,Jack and Kay,both living away from home.One day,Ted met a young woman named Yvonne and soon bought her an engagement ring.
Due to the age difference and Yvonne’s suspicious overspending,Jack determined to find out everything about Yvonne.He unexpectedly found Yvonne had five engagement rings.When Jack told Ted that Yvonne was a defrauder,Ted was hurt and told them the other explanation.
尤其是那句suspicious overspending我是想表达她花得比赚得多 很可疑

Answer 1

Ted was a wealthy,lonely widower who had two children,Jack and Kay,both living away from home.One day,Ted met a young woman named Yvonne and soon bought her an engagement ring.
改：One day,Ted met a young woman named Yvonne; and he bought her an engagement ring shortly after they met.
因为你句首写 one day,
依照你的写法,似乎买婚戒与两人见面都发生在同一个 one day.（同一天）
所以我将它改成两个句子.（除非真是发生在同一天,你就别改了）
Due to the age difference and Yvonne’s suspicious overspending,Jack determined to find out everything about Yvonne.He unexpectedly found Yvonne had five engagement rings.When Jack told Ted that Yvonne was a defrauder,Ted was hurt and told them the other explanation.
改：Due to their age difference and Yvonne's suspicious spendthrift ways,Jack decided to .
...Yvonne was a trickster,Ted was hurt and gave them another explanation.
你用the other explanation是错误的.the other表示只有两种.不是这个,就是另一个.没有第三种解释.