请懂英语的帮忙看下下面这句话有语法错误么有的话怎么改比较好

Question

paper books will take up a lot of trees to destory the environment as opposed to e-books are more environmentally friendly

Answer 1

Books made from paper use a lot of trees to make and they destroy the environment too; where as e-books are much more environmental-friendly than books made from paper.本回答被提问者和网友采纳

Answer 2

句子太长太乱了。你可以把纸质书和电子书的特点分为两句说追问

paper books will take up a lot of trees to destory the environment 。 so e-books are more environmentally friendly 这样呢？