英语短文改错,大神来看看,回答的时候就比如第一句什么要改,什么单词删除,什么单词后添加什么单词这样

英语短文改错,大神来看看,回答的时候就比如第一句什么要改,什么单词删除,什么单词后添加什么单词这样子比较容易看懂。像素应该可以吧?看不清的话回复一下,我再重新拍

第1个回答  2016-01-20
  Hi, Eva,
  I am sorry that I haven't been in touch with you for a while. I caught a cold last week, thus I've been in bed for four days. I felt better today. It's so lucky that my classes won't start till next week.
  I had a good news that I am going to attend a conference in your town in May, from 16th to 20th. Could you reccommend me a hotel where is situated in the centre of town? I hope it will be a place which is not too expensive because of my limited budget. After that, I will have a free half-day for sightseeing. Could you show me around during this time?
  Looking forward to your reply soon.
  Chris追问

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