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你好,教授,我请求你,能否把我的assessment分数调高一点,达到75分以上?我有出国读研的目标,而75分以上和75分以下对GPA的影响有很大不同,进而对出国的申请材料影响很大。您给我的这门课的分数对我将来出国读研具有很关键的意义,我请求您助我一臂之力!
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第1个回答  2013-12-31
Hello, professor. I beg you, you could change my assessment score higher, more than 75 points? I have to go abroad to attend graduate school goals, and more than 75 points and 75 points below the impact on GPA are quite different, which had a great influence on the application materials to go abroad. You give me the score of this course is essential for me to go abroad to attend graduate school in the future, I request you to help me out!
第2个回答  2013-12-31
。。。这水平,出去了也白搭。。。
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