急用!哪位英语高手帮忙翻译下!(拒绝机翻)

请翻译:你好,我叫***,今年21岁,毕业于江西航空学院,我来应聘的职位是前台接待员,我处事认真负责,喜欢与人沟通,吃苦耐劳。
希望贵酒店能够给我一个锻炼与提高的机会,我一定努力做好自己的工作。

(拒绝机翻!!!以下是机翻的例子!)
You are good, I call to the jade rainbow, this year 21 years old, graduate from the Jiangxi Aeronautical institute, I respond to a call for recruits the position is the onstage reception clerk, I handle matters am responsible, to like earnestly with the human communicating, bear hardships and stand hard work. hoped that the expensive hotel can give me an exercise and the enhancement opportunity, I complete my work certainly diligently.

第1个回答  2008-07-25
Hello. My name is XXX. I'm 21 years old. I graduate from Jiangxi Aviation College. I'm applying for the position of desk clerk. I like communication with people. What's more, I have a strong sense of responsibility and endurance of labour.

把顺序换了一下,认真负责和吃苦耐劳放在一起比较好翻译。
第2个回答  2008-07-25
Hello, my name is ... . i'm 21 year-old, graduated from Jiangxi College of Aeronautics. I want to be taken as a receptionist. I am responsible, and good at communiating with people. I hope that you can give me a chance to challenge and inprove my ability. I will try my best to do my job.

参考资料:自己翻的

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第3个回答  2008-07-25
Holle,I'm XXX,21 years old.I gruduated from Jiangxi College of Aeronautics,and apply for the position of receptionist.Communicating readily, working hard and carefully are parts of my personality.
I wish you hotel could offer me such position to improve myself.I promise that I will try my best and do a good job.