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Question

Hello! Everyone. My name is star. I’m 14years old. My birthday is April 2st.I’m study in Kangleli primary school. I like apple and banana very much. I like playing computer games. I’m good at swim. I have a best friend. He is my classmate. His name is Yuan mingxu. He likes bread and egg. He is good at basketball. I like my friend
There four people in my family. There are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents are businessman. My brother is 14years old. He studies in No.14 middle school. My telephone number is86670779.I like my family.

Answer 1

Hello! Everyone. My name is star. I’m 14 years old. My birthday is April (2nd).I’m study(ing) in Kangleli primary school. I like apple and banana very much. I like playing computer games. I’m good at swim. I have a best friend. He is my classmate. His name is Yuan mingxu. He likes bread and egg. He is good at basketball. I like my friend.
There (are) four people in my family. (They) are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents are businessman. My brother is 14 years old. He studies in No.14 middle school. My telephone number is86670779.I like my family.

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大家好！我的名字叫小星。今年14岁。4月2日是我的生日。我在康乐里小学上学。我很喜欢吃苹果和香蕉。我喜欢玩电脑游戏。我会游泳。我有一个好朋友，他是我同班同学。他叫袁明旭。他喜欢吃面包和鸡蛋。他篮球打得很棒。我喜欢我的朋友。
我家共有4口人：父亲，母亲，哥哥和我。我父母是商人。我哥哥14岁（twins?)。他在14中上学。我的电话号码是86670779。我爱我家！

Answer 2

大家好。 我的名字是星。 我14岁了。 我生日是4月2号，我我在kangleli小学上学。我非常喜欢苹果和香蕉。 我喜欢玩电脑游戏。 我擅长游泳。 我有一位最好的朋友。 他是我的同班同学。 他的名字是袁明旭。 他喜欢面包和蛋。 他擅长篮球。 我喜欢我的朋友。
我家里有四个人。 父亲，母亲，哥哥和我。 我的父母是商人。 我的哥哥14岁了。 他在14中读书。 我的电话号码86670779. 我爱我的家人

Answer 3

大家好。我叫star(星）。我今年14岁，生日是4月2日。我现就读与Kangleli小学。我非常喜欢苹果和香蕉。我的爱好是玩电脑游戏。我擅长游泳。我有一个好朋友，他是我的同学，他叫Yuan mingxu。他喜欢面包和鸡蛋。他的篮球打得很好。我喜欢我的朋友。
我家有4口人：我的爸爸、妈妈，哥哥和我。我的父母是商人。我的哥哥14岁，在14中学读书。我的电话号码是86670779。我爱我的家庭。

Answer 4

大家好。我叫star(星）。我今年14岁，生日是4月2日。我现就读与Kangleli小学。我非常喜欢苹果和香蕉。我的爱好是玩电脑游戏。我擅长游泳。我有一个好朋友，他是我的同学，他叫Yuan mingxu。他喜欢面包和鸡蛋。他的篮球打得很好。我喜欢我的朋友。
我家有4口人：我的爸爸、妈妈，哥哥和我。我的父母是商人。我的哥哥14岁，在14中学读书。我的电话号码是86670779。我爱我的家庭。

Answer 5

大家好，我叫star。14岁，生日是4月2日。我在kangleli小学上学。我很喜欢苹果和香蕉。我喜欢玩电脑游戏。擅长游泳。我有一个好朋友，他是同学,叫袁明绪。他喜欢吃面包和鸡蛋。他擅长篮球。我喜欢我的朋友。
我家里有4个人。爸爸、妈妈、哥哥和我。我的父母是生意人。我的哥哥14岁在14中上学。我的电话号码是86670779。我爱我的家人。
Hello! Everyone. My name is star. I’m 14 years old. My birthday is April 2st.I’m studying in Kangleli primary school. I like apple and banana very much. I like playing computer games as well. I’m also good at swimming. I have a good friend. He is my classmate. His name is Yuan mingxu. He likes bread and egg. He is good at basketball. I like my friend
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents are businessman. My brother is 14 years old. He is studying in No.14 middle school. My telephone number is 86670779.I like(love) my family.(修改）