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冼星海于1905年出生于中国澳门，他在巴黎学习过。他运用中国传统音乐，把西方音乐和中国音乐结合在一起。他以《黄河大合唱》而著名，于1935仅用6天写成。他的音乐主旨是要让世界了解中国，然而在1945年，他去世了，他被称为人民音乐家，他的歌已经流行了60多年。

Answer 1

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冼星海于1905年出生于中国澳门，他在巴黎学习过。
Xian Xinghai was born in Macao,China in 1905.
他运用中国传统音乐，把西方音乐和中国音乐结合在一起。
He integrated Western and Chinese music together by using classical Chinese musical.
他以《黄河大合唱》而著名，于1935仅用6天写成。
The Yellow River Chorus, which was composed simply 6 days, made him a name.
他的音乐主旨是要让世界了解中国，然而在1945年，他去世了，
His music keynote is to let the world come to understand China.However, he died in 1945.
他被称为人民音乐家，他的歌已经流行了60多年。
He was designated by the name of people's musician, and his songs have been popular for more than 60 years.

Answer 2

1905 saw Xinghai Xian born in Macao,China and he used to study in Paris.By using the classical Chinese music style,he give it a mixture of the western and the Chinese music.He is famous for the Yellow River Cantata,the song which took him only six days to write.The theme of his music is to let the whole globe get to know about China.In 1945,however,Xian,the great musician of ours,passed away,and his songs have been popular for over sixty years by then.

Answer 3

Xian Xinghai was born in China and Macao in 1905, he studied in Paris. His use of traditional Chinese music, Chinese music and Western music together. Taking the "Yellow River Cantata", which is famous in just six days into 1935. The main thrust of his music is to let the world understand China, but in 1945, at the time of his death, he was known musician. His songs have been popular 60 years.

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