跪求一篇英语作文。字数在150左右的英语作文。题目详情打开看。好的加分哦

Question

题目背景: Imagine that you are Billor Melinda Gates and that you are leaving your children a large inheritance .
要求：Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .
要150字左右。跪求啊。。好的加分哦。

Answer 1

题目背景：假如你是比勒•麦琳达•盖茨，并且你将要给孩子们留下一大笔遗产。
要求：写一封信给你的孩子们解释你对于他们继承的想法，并建议他们如何使用它。
（关于你所给的两个条件，我翻译了一遍，但是有一处我个人认为的错误，就是how not to use it翻译为“如何不使用它”，但是放入原句中意思就成了这样：
Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .
翻译：写一封信给你的孩子们解释你对于他们继承的想法，并建议他们如何不使用它。
遗产应该是被用来继承的，但却不能使用，这很让人奇怪，所以我就改成了这样：
Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how to use it .
翻译：写一封信给你的孩子们解释你对于他们继承的想法，并建议他们如何使用它。
去掉not，句子的意思就很通顺了，算是我给你的一点建议，所以我就按这种意思给你写好了作文。）
以下是我编写的英语作文：
Dear childern:
I have a very terrible illness these days.I feel so sick that I can't walk everywhere.Because of this,I think I will die soon and each of my friends is very sad to me.But I am still filled with optimistic（乐观）.You,my childern,still want to make me happy though I am old.So I am leaving my children a large inheritance（遗产）.This my gift for you（你们）and you should cherish（珍视）this inheritance.And I hope you are able to try your best to use it.These are my suggestions about using the inheritance:First,you can't play or do some boring things to run out of my inheritance quickly,if you do these,I ill give my inheritance for the charities.Second,I hope you have a very good life,becausethis is a saying（谚语）"The unexamined life is not worth living （未经考验的生活是不值得过的。 ）".
Please remember what I said,my childern.I will die,but my childern are still young.And I will have nothing after dying,but you have your lover,your friends and your best teacher in your life.Good luck to you,my dear childern!
Yours,
Billor Melinda Gates
打字好累了，能不能加点儿分吧！ 有劳动就有收获的！

Answer 2

Dear children
when you see that about write.I'm leaving.I hope you don't sad . I have a large inheritance about you. first,my biggest son can get 50 hundred million .my second daughter
,because you are a girl. you should get more money .but I think money should give hardship‘s
children.you are best.i believe you.but my company to belong you.i also hope you can help
hardship‘s human .if you have too much money .Don' Do wrong.Don't drug taking.you should
help more person.you should Save money.i'm not In your side.you should look after yourself.
love you forever

Answer 3

Imagine that you are Billor Melinda Gates and that you are leaving your children a large inheritance . Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .
Imagine that you are Billor Melinda Gates and that you are leaving your children a large inheritance . Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .Write a letter to your children explaining their inheritance, your reasons for it ,and advising them how not to use it .
I have a very terrible illness these days.I feel so sick that I can't walk everywhere.Because of this,I think I will die soon and each of my friends is very sad to me.But I am still filled with optimistic（乐观）.You,my childern,still want to make me happy though I am old.So I am leaving my children a large inheritance（遗产）.This my gift for you（你们）and you should cherish（珍视）this inheritance.And I hope you are able to try your best to use it.These are my suggestions about using the inheritance:First,you can't play or do some boring things to run out of my inheritance quickly,if you do these,I ill give my inheritance for the charities.Second,I hope you have a very good life,becausethis is a saying（谚语）"The unexamined life is not worth living （未经考验的生活是不值得过的。 ）".
Please remember what I said,my childern.I will die,but my childern are still young.And I will have nothing after dying,but you have your lover,your friends and your best teacher in your life.Good luck to you,my dear childern!
Yours,
Billor Melinda Gates

参考资料：复制