求好人来翻译一下

one last dance with you
even though what we have is strong
both of us know that we've done wrong
you could lose everything
need to give it up
just one last dance with you
for all the moments that we shared
all the lies they don't compare
you gotta go back to him
and i realize that every time i see you* **ce i know
there's a part of me that can't bear to let you go
and i would give my heart
give you the world, risk losing everything i got
i'd give it all to you
though i don't wanna stop
i know it's the right thing to do...yeah
so hard to find the words to say
but i can't see any other way
girl you've risked everything
time to give it up
and though it breaks my heart to leave
we both know it's time to let it breathe
girl i realize that every time i see you* **ce i know
so many times we tried to hold back
we been here before now girl
and it feels so cruel, yeah
a million tears won't change the fact that
i find it hard to play the game
when i feel like i'm the one to blame
but i would give my heart
and make our peace with god
one last dance with you...oh year...oh yeah
有英语大师翻译一下吗?都不对哦...

以一个英语专业的学生的角度来说,我觉得楼上的基本上是正确的,而且有的地方真的是说得很妙,不得不佩服下~不过如果想要连贯一点,可以加些暗藏在里头的字眼,我写在括号里

one last dance with you 与你共舞最后一曲
even though what we have is strong 虽然我们拥有的是那样的坚定(我斟酌很久,估计是暗指爱情,你也可以换个别的形容词)
both of us know that we've done wrong 但你我都知道我们已做错
you could lose everything (这样继续下去的话)你会失去全部
need to give it up 所以必须放弃了
just one last dance with you 只(想)与你共舞最后一曲
for all the moments that we shared 为我们(曾经拥有过)的每一刻而舞
all the lies they don't compare 为他们不在意的谎言而舞
you gotta go back to him (这之后)你(就)要回到他的身边(了)
and i realize that every time i see your face i know 而我才意识到每次看到你的脸庞(这里或许可以翻译成“在我看见你的时候才意识到,我是知道的”。然后下一个“我知道”可以起到强调的作用)
there's a part of me that can't bear to let you go 我知道我(身体里)的一部分无法忍受你的离去
and i would give my heart
give you the world, risk losing everything i got
i'd give it all to you
我会将我的心给你,把世界给你,冒着失去一切的风险,将这全部给你
though i don't wanna stop 尽管我不想停止
i know it's the right thing to do...yeah 但我知道这是正确的
so hard to find the words to say 这一切是那样的无法言喻 (或者说,我不知道还能说什么)
but i can't see any other way 可是我又不知道该用什么其它的表达 (或者说,可是我真的看不到还有什么解决的方法)
girl you've risked everything 女孩,你(已经)冒了各种风险
time to give it up 是时候放弃了
and though it breaks my heart to leave 虽然离去令我心碎
we both know it's time to let it breathe 但你我都知道是时候了
girl i realize that every time i see your face i know 女孩,我才意识到每次看到你的脸庞,我知道
so many times we tried to hold back 我们这么多次的踌躇着
we been here before now girl 我们曾来过这里,女孩
and it feels so cruel, yeah 这是如此的残酷
a million tears won't change the fact that
i find it hard to play the game
无数的眼泪都无法改变我无法继续的事实
when i feel like i'm the one to blame 当我知道我才是罪人
but i would give my heart 但是我会将我的心给你
and make our peace with god 与上帝共创和平 (这样翻译好像太官方了,有点突兀,如果想要美一点的话,可以说“并且缔造一份永恒的宁静”)
one last dance with you...oh year...oh yeah与你共舞(这)最后一曲。。。
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第1个回答  2007-07-30
这是《One last dance》的歌词吧?
对不起啊
我找不到
只有《Just one last dance》的歌词
第2个回答  2007-07-30
Just One Last Dance最后一曲
Translated by Recco 译/王小瑞

Just one last dance....oh baby...just one last dance
最后一曲 哦 亲爱的 最后一曲

We meet in the night in the Spanish café
那个夜晚 我们在西班牙咖啡馆相遇
I look in your eyes just don't know what to say
望着你的双眸 心有千言竟无语
It feels like I'm drowning in salty water
泪水已令我尽陷沉溺

A few hours left 'til the sun's gonna rise
几个时辰过后 阳光便要升起
tomorrow will come an it's time to realize
明日终将到来
our love has finished forever
爱情永远分离

how I wish to come with you (wish to come with you)
多想和你一起(和你一起)
how I wish we make it through
多想共同继续

Just one last dance
最后一曲
before we say goodbye
再说别离
when we sway and turn round and round and round
一次次挥手转身
it's like the first time
初次相遇般难舍难离
Just one more chance
再多一次机会
hold me tight and keep me warm
紧紧拥抱 充满爱意
cause the night is getting cold
因夜已渐冷
and I don't know where I belong
我意乱情迷
Just one last dance
最后一曲

The wine and the lights and the Spanish guitar
夜光美酒 琴声(吉它)响起
I'll never forget how romantic they are
浪漫之夜 永难忘记
but I know, tomorrow I'll lose the one I love
我知道明日将痛失吾爱
There's no way to come with you
永远不能再相偎相依
it's the only thing to do
舍此无它

Just one last dance
最后一曲
before we say goodbye
再说别离
when we sway and turn round and round and round
一次次挥手转身
it's like the first time
初次相遇般难舍难离
Just one more chance
再多一次机会
hold me tight and keep me warm
紧紧拥抱 充满爱意
cause the night is getting cold
因夜已渐冷
and I don't know where I belong
我意乱情迷
Just one last dance, just one more chance, just one last dance
最后一曲 最后一次 最后一曲
第3个回答  2007-07-30
我翻译一下前几句:最后一次和你共舞 尽管我们拥有很多 我们都知道我们已做错
第4个回答  2007-07-31
其中最后一支舞与你,即使我们有强大的,我们都知道,我们所做的错误 你可以失去一切,要放弃它只是其中最后一支舞与你的一切时刻,我们 分享所有的谎言,他们不把你gotta认为回他,我知道我每次美国 ee的,你* **长官,我知道的一部份,我舍不得让你走我为数 劳工处让我的心给你,世界的ris 钾失去一切,我有我要给它全部给你,虽然我不想阻止,我不知道它的钻机 ht的事……唉,所以很难找到词说,但我看不出任何其他方式你的女孩 ' ve的不顾一切的时候又放弃了,虽然它打破我的心离开,我们都知道它的添 电子让它呼吸女孩,我知道我每次看到你* **长官,我知道这么多的时候,我们 试图拉回我们以前来过,现在的女孩,感觉这么残忍,や 八万人的眼泪都不会改变一个事实,我也很难玩游戏时,我觉得铌 五我是一个怪,但我会给我的心,使我们的和平与上帝的最后一丹 行政长官与你……唉……一年噢
第5个回答  2007-08-05
(咦,我就是想和“回答者:fightangel - 见习魔法师 二级”说句话,修改了一下答案,怎么就被挤到楼下来了?)

以下是我在其之前的答案:他的话也是对我的答案说的。。。楼主可不要认为那是对那个乱七八糟的答案说的。。。。。。

原来是CD的歌啊。。。。

one last dance with you 与你共舞最后一曲
even though what we have is strong 虽然我们拥有的是那样的坚定(我斟酌很久,估计是暗指爱情,你也可以换个别的形容词)
both of us know that we've done wrong 但你我都知道我们已做错
you could lose everything 你会失去全部
need to give it up 所以必须放弃了
just one last dance with you 只与你共舞最后一曲
for all the moments that we shared 为我们的每一刻而舞
all the lies they don't compare 为他们不在意的谎言而舞
you gotta go back to him 你要回到他的身边
and i realize that every time i see your face i know 而我才意识到每次看到你的脸庞
there's a part of me that can't bear to let you go 我知道我的一部分无法忍受你的离去
and i would give my heart
give you the world, risk losing everything i got
i'd give it all to you
我会将我的心给你,把世界给你,冒着失去一切的风险,将这全部给你
though i don't wanna stop 尽管我不想停止
i know it's the right thing to do...yeah 但我知道这是正确的
so hard to find the words to say 这一切是那样的无法言喻
but i can't see any other way 可是我又不知道该用什么其它的表达
girl you've risked everything 女孩,你冒了各种风险
time to give it up 是时候放弃了
and though it breaks my heart to leave 虽然离去令我心碎
we both know it's time to let it breathe 但你我都知道是时候了
girl i realize that every time i see your face i know 女孩,我才意识到每次看到你的脸庞,我知道
so many times we tried to hold back 我们这么多次的踌躇着
we been here before now girl 我们曾来过这里,女孩
and it feels so cruel, yeah 这是如此的残酷
a million tears won't change the fact that
i find it hard to play the game
无数的眼泪都无法改变我无法继续的事实
when i feel like i'm the one to blame 当我知道我才是罪人
but i would give my heart 但是我会将我的心给你
and make our peace with god 与上帝共创和平
one last dance with you...oh year...oh yeah与你共舞最后一曲。。。

累死了!!

楼下还真是有耐心哦。。。谢谢夸奖。小的也就是高中生一个,能得到高手的夸奖真是受宠若惊.话说阁下的确修改的是。不过主要是小的当初想尽量简便(让翻译更像歌歌词),就意译了一些东西,在无伤大雅的情况下,没有将一些单词译出来。总的来说,还是谢谢楼下的学长(学姐?),hoho~~~