帮忙翻译下,中译英!

您好:
感谢您在百忙之中回复我的邮件,我从新更新了一下订单。您帮忙计算一下总价,然后告诉我。如果无误,我就给您打款了,请您在收到货款后通知我,尽快帮我安排发货,您看还有什么问题吗?XXX是您的账号,请核对下。谢谢。

第1个回答  2011-10-10
Dear Mr/Ms -----,

Thank you very much for replying my message. I have revised my order again. Please verify the total amount on my order and let me know whether my calculation was correct. If the amount is accurate, I will remit the money to you. Please inform me when you got the payment and arrange delivery as soon as possible. Should there be any further questions, just let me know. Please also verify your bank account information listed below:
Bank Name:
Branch Name:
Account Name:
Account Number: xxxxx

Thanks again and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards;;;;
第2个回答  2011-10-10
Hello:
Thank you for taking the time to reply my mail, I updated a bit from the new order. To help calculate your total price, then tell me. If correct, I'll give you play money, and please notify me after receiving the payment as soon as possible to help me arrange delivery, you see what the problem? XXX is your account, please check the next. Thank you.
第3个回答  2011-10-10
Dear Sir,
Thanks for you attention in advance. I updated the order, please check the amount and let me know. If it is correct, I will make the payment. Once you get the payment, please inform me and arrange shipment as soon as possible. Please help to verify your account: XXXX, am I right?
Feel free to let me know if you have any other questions,

thanks,

望采纳 !
第4个回答  2011-10-19
Hi there,

Thank you for sparing your precious time on replying me the mail. I have updated the order. Please help calculate the total price and inform me the result. If there's nothing wrong, I will transfer the money to you. Please confirm to us when you have received the money and arrange the shipment of the goods asap.
By the way, please check the personal account as follows. Thank you very much.
下面打帐号信息就可以了。最后别忘记
Best regards,
xxx(your name)

说真的,这翻译个人看法没有任何问题了,你可以自己比较下。绝对不是什么机器翻的
第5个回答  2011-10-10
Hello:

Thank you in spite of being very busy back my mail, I had a new update order. You help to calculate the total price, and then tell me. If correct, I will give you a payment, please you receive payment notice me, help me to arrange shipment as soon as possible, you see what's the problem? XXX is your account number, please check it. Thank you.