马来西亚留学国民大学口语面试，全英语，不要那种在线翻译器，会有语法错误，谢谢。在线等！

Question

我今年18岁，我的家乡在XXXX，一个山清水秀的城市。我一个半月前从黄石二中顺利毕业，早在高一的时候我就对马来西亚的国民大学（National University of Malaysia）有所了解，不仅是因为马来西亚的景色优雅，也因为国民大学是东南亚乃至全球都非常著名的大学。而且我非常喜欢看书，国民大学拥有一座东南亚最大及藏书量最多的大学图书馆，这是最吸引我的地方。国民大学是世界科技类大学100强，所以我选择了大学的工商管理国际贸易的专业，性格活泼开朗的我，心思细腻，对于人际、交流、待事（对待事情）都很敏感，也很有信心，我希望以后能从事自己感兴趣的职业。我喜欢音乐和看电影，也很喜欢运动，我常常会和家人一起打羽毛球，爬山，旅游。我的父亲是一名个体户（在国外这样的怎么说啊？麻烦翻译详细点，谢谢！！），我的母亲是中国一家大型国有企业的营销者，他们的月薪都在四千人民币以上。他们很宠爱我思想也很民主，他们尊重我的一切选择，只是希望我过得幸福，健康，平安。读书，也是为了将来能够更好而回报他们。

我的英语语法还不是太好，自己也在这边写这篇面试稿，其实这是电话面试而已，时间不长，可是我还是希望有英语高手帮帮我，这次是半公费，所以我想要好好拼搏一次，文章我也没有写太长吧，希望有面试经验的大神帮我看看我说的话那里缺陷了，帮我补充一下！谢谢，万分感谢！！

Answer 1

I’m 18 years old (建议：加上性别a boy/girl?) and my hometown is in xxxx, a place with picturesque scenery. I just finished my secondary education one and a half months ago from Huangshi No.2 Secondary School.
I’ve gained some understanding about the National University of Malaysia (NUM) since I was in my freshman year of high school; I like it not only because Malaysia is a beautiful country, but also because NUM is a famous university in South-east Asia and even worldwide.
Moreover, as I like reading very much, what NUM attracts me the most is that the library in NUM which is the biggest one both in size and the amount of book collections over the South-east Asia.
My option for major is Business Administration – International Trade, taking the fact into consideration that NUM is listed as one of the world’s top 100 universities ranking in terms of science and technology.

I am a lively open and bright guy with a touchy-feel manner; I could be sensitive with interpersonal relationship, interactions and dealing with matters but full of confidence as well.
I wish I could be able to engage in an occupation of my interest in my future’s career.
Speaking of my hobbies, I like music, movies and also sports. I often join my family for badminton, hiking and travelling.
My father is a self-employed businessman, and my mother works in marketing area for a big sized state-owned enterprise. Both of them have a monthly wage over RMB 4000 yuan.
My parents are very open-minded and always being crazy about me. They respect all my choices and what they care the most is if I can live happily, healthily and peacefully.

To achieve academic success through hard studying is believed the best way to give my parents a better return favor in future.

几点建议：
1. 因为你选修的是工商管理国际贸易专业，你的英文水平怎样，都参加过那些国际知名英语水平测试（雅思成绩有没？）
2. 介绍一下电脑水平如何，如Office软件的应用
3. 如果能将你本人的介绍再丰富一些，特别是加上一些社会活动事例的简介就更好了。

Answer 2

我今年18岁，我的家乡在XXXX，一个山清水秀的城市。我一个半月前从黄石二中顺利毕业，早在高一的时候我就对马来西亚的国民大学（National University of Malaysia）有所了解，不仅是因为马来西亚的景色优雅，也因为国民大学是东南亚乃至全球都非常著名的大学。而且我非常喜欢看书，国民大学拥有一座东南亚最大及藏书量最多的大学图书馆，这是最吸引我的地方。国民大学是世界科技类大学100强，所以我选择了大学的工商管理国际贸易的专业。
I’m 18 years old and my home is in xxx, a picturesque town. I had just completed my secondary education from Huangshi No.2 Secondary School. I already knew about National University of Malaysia when I was in senior-middle one; I like it not only because Malaysia is a beautiful country, but also because NUM is a renowned university in South-east Asia and in the world as well. As I enjoy reading a lot, the part of NUM that attracts me the most is the school library which is the biggest in size and book collections in South-east Asia. I opt for majoring in Business Administration – International Trade due to the fact that NUM is among the world’s top 100 universities of science and technology.

性格活泼开朗的我，心思细腻，对于人际、交流、待事（对待事情）都很敏感，也很有信心，我希望以后能从事自己感兴趣的职业。我喜欢音乐和看电影，也很喜欢运动，我常常会和家人一起打羽毛球，爬山，旅游。我的父亲是一名个体户（在国外这样的怎么说啊？麻烦翻译详细点，谢谢！！），我的母亲是中国一家大型国有企业的营销者，他们的月薪都在四千人民币以上。他们很宠爱我思想也很民主，他们尊重我的一切选择，只是希望我过得幸福，健康，平安。读书，也是为了将来能够更好而回报他们。
I am an outgoing person with a delicate mind; I am susceptible in terms of personal relationship, interactions and dealing with matters, and I’m full of confidence as well. I wish to be able to engage in a profession of my liking in future. As regards my hobbies, I love music and movies; I’m also interested in sports, that’s why I often play badminton, go hiking and travel with my family. My father is a small self-employed businessman, and my mother works in the sales department of a state-owned enterprise; both of their monthly wages exceed 4000 RMB (注：建议不提收入). My parents are very democratic and love me very much; they respect all of my choices and hope that I can live happily, healthily and peacefully. I want to strive to achieve academic success to repay them.

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