看一下这个英语作文有哪些语法错误容易被扣分，不要吐槽。

Question

如题所述

Answer 1

It is clear that we have many problem (problems). For example, we(要改为our) body isn't beautiful. We can not (cannot是一个字要连写) understand eash other. There is no doubt that we need (要加to) solve these problem(problems是复数).
There are two main way (ways是复数) for change (要改为solving) (要加the) problem (problems). (去掉 On one hand, it is obvious 改为: first,) (去掉 that) we should not care (加 too much about) our face(改为 appearances). (去掉 on the other hand, no one can deny 改为: Secondly,) we need (要加to learn to) understand each other (可以加more).
When you (去掉feel 改为 are having too) many exam(exams), here are several suggestions (去掉 for the condition 改为: to help you relax). For one thing, needless to say, we should go to (the) park. for another thing, it goes without saying that we should go (可以去掉 to) swimming.

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Answer 2

problems
our body isnt beautiful
two main ways to solve
on one hand 改成 one is, on the other hand 改成 the other one is
care about our own face. (face 最好换成 appearance)
on one can deny that we need to understand

第二段整个看不明白。

Answer 3

第二行　our bodies aren't不是we body isn't
第三行understand不是understant
第二段第一行two main ways problems s忘加了
第二段第三行no one can deny that 逗号改成that

Answer 4

全部都
有语法错误容易被扣分

Answer 5

初一吗