给这家杂志写一封信,表达你对孩子们上课外补习课的看法.使用下面的表达来帮助你 八下英语作文！！！

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Answer 1

Hi!
A lot of kids now these days have to go to a lot of classes weekdays and weekends, all parents want their kids to be smarter , learn more things, they think it can help them with their kid's future ! In a way ,that's right, but have you thought of how your kid feels? everyday , when they come back from school , done finsh all their homework tired and wants to rest , the parents will take them to go for Maths lessons, not letting them explain . On weekends, the kids want to go out and play , they want to go and see movies, do some fun games and exercise. But no! the parents will take them to go and have english lessons, dancing classes piano lesson. I want to ask all these parents, have you thought of what your child really wants to do? What they really like ? Am i stopping you from letting your kid go to classes? NO! Just talk to your child , know what they really like, and less classes and more fun! Let your kid have a rest!

Answer 2

一    提纲

说明写信意图：表达。。看法    

说明个人观点及缘由

赞成适度补习，反对过度补习。  原因：其一，适度补习 培优补差，培养学习兴趣，提高学习成绩。比如举例自己适度补习从英语差生变成优等生。其二，过度补习造成厌学占用孩子玩耍时间不利孩子身心发展

感谢杂志编辑人员的阅读，期待他们的回信

二   范文 

Dear editor

I'm writing this letter to express my opinion on Extracurricular classes【课外补习班】.

As i think,children had better take lessons after school properly instead of spending too much time on it.First，suitable extra study does promote【提高】the good and help the less good .Take me as an example,extra English study turn me from under-acheiver into acheiver.However,spending too much time on study easily makes a student bored and seize his right to play,which is bad for him.

Thanks for your reading .looking forward to your reply.