大二的学生,想写一篇英语演讲稿,约3分钟的。内容如下的,求高手翻译。如果可以帮忙改进一下就更好,感

如果可以帮忙改进一下就更好了,感激
题目:我的两位英语老师
正文:
在我的学生生活中,有两位英语老师给我带来了很深远的影响,我很尊敬他们。或者说,他们是我最喜欢的老师。
一位是我高中时的老师,虽然他只教了我一个学期,但是他有一句话给了我很大的鼓舞,我也因此而对学习英语充满信心。至今我仍然很记得他给我的教诲。
另一位就是现在坐在我们面前的miss wei 。你们可以重复一次她上课的开场白吗?那就是:"...."
我感觉到她是一个很有爱心的老师,我们可以从她的行为中可以看出来,例如:她会让我们看电影,如果我们提前完成学习任务的话;她会很认真地批改作业,然后在课堂上表扬一些同学;她总会让我们提前10分钟放学,让我们赶在别人的前面到达饭堂。
你是我们上大学以来见过最有爱的老师。所以,我们特别想跟你说声对不起,因为我们常常惹你生气。
上大三之后,我们将很难才有机会再坐在一个课室里,上着以你经典开场白开始的课堂了。
最后,谢谢你miss

During my school time,there are two English teachers who have a profound influence on me and I respect them very much.In another word,they are my favorite teachers.
The first one was in my high school.Though he taught me for just one semester,one of his words inspired me a lot,which made me feel confident in my English study since then.Now I can still remember his instruction.
The other one,now sitting in front of us,is Miss Wei.I really love the words she uses for the beginning of class..... (可以看出楼主想要和下面的同学互动,但是效果应该不太好,因为大学的课可能不仅不会有很多人听,而且听力未必好,但是尽量让老师听懂吧)
I think she is a teacher with great kindness.We can feel it from what she did for us.When we finish the task in advance,she will play a movie on class.She checks our homework earnestly and praise someone who did good so as to encourage us.She always ends the class 10 minutes earlier,considering we can thus arrive the canteen before the others.
You are the most lovely teacher during my university life.However,We want to say sorry,because our laziness sometimes makes you angry.
When we become the junior,we may not have a chance to be together in a classroom,attending the class with your own splendid beginning.
As the end of my speech,i want to say 'thank you,Miss Wei' in standing for all of us.

文章里面有点改动,以便通顺符合逻辑。还有问题的话欢迎追问,正好作为翻译练习哈哈~
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第1个回答  2013-05-05
During my study, there are two English teachers who influence me a lot in my life. I respect them or even I would like to say they are the best teachers of mine.
The first one taught me when I was in hight school. Though he taught me for one semester, one of his words really impressed me and encouraged me. Thus I became more confident in my English study. Until now I still could remember his every word.
The other one is Miss Wei, sitting in front of us now. Could you repeat her opening every class? ......
I think she is a very loving teacher. I can see from her behavior. For example, she would allow us watching movies if we could finish our study early. She is very responsible, marks every copy of assignment carefully and praises students in class. And she is also very thoughtful. she finishes her class 10 minutes ahead in order to ask us to get to the canteen before the other students.
You are my favorite teacher in the university. But I have to say sorry to you, because sometimes we made you angry. After the third, we will have little chance to stay in your class and enjoy your special opening. I will miss you.
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第2个回答  2013-05-05
Two of my English teacher
In my student life, there are two English teachers brought me a very profound influence, I respect them, or, they are my favorite teacher is my high school teacher, although he only taught me a semester, but there's a phrase he gave me a great encouragement, and so I have confidence in learning English since I was still remember instructing him to give me.
Another is now sitting in front of us miss wei you can repeat her opening remarks in class? That is: "..." I feel she is a very has the compassion of the teacher, we can can see out from her behavior, for example: she'll let us see a movie, if we complete the study task ahead; She will be our homework very carefully, and then praise some students in the classroom; She is always let us school 10 minutes ahead of schedule, let us catch up to the dining hall in front of others.
Seen the most love since you are our college teacher so, we especially want to talk to you say I'm sorry, because we often make you angry, junior year, it will be difficult for us to have a chance to sit in a classroom, the class in the classic opening line to you.
In the end, thank you.
望采纳~谢谢
第3个回答  2013-05-05
The students in my life, there are two English teachers gave me a profound impact, I respect them. Or, they are my most love teacher.
One is my high school teacher, although he only taught me a semester, but he has a word gave me great encouragement, I also therefore to study English with confidence. I still remember he gave me.
Another is now sitting in front of us. You can repeat her class opening? That is: "..."
I feel that she is a very caring teacher, we can see from her behavior, for example: she'll let us go to the movie, if we complete the learning task ahead of you; she will check the homework very carefully, and then for some students in the classroom; she always let us 10 minutes ahead of schedule after school, let us get to the canteen in front of others.
You are our university since seen the most loving teacher. So, we especially want to say sorry to you, because we always make you angry.
After three, it will be difficult for us to have the chance to sit in a classroom, a classic begins in your classroom.
Finally, thank you