短文改错 good morning, ladies and gentlemen ! I'd like tell you something

good morning, ladies and gentlemen ! I'd like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you for those who wants to ski ,you can rent skis on the spot , and boots . Don't forget it can get quite cold in the day , so warm cloths are must . The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnt . The hotel booking for you is very comfortable , and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared for those looking for another activities there are lovely walks good views and interesting birds up the hit. Finally I'd like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food .

第一排最后的it去掉,第二排中间“and boots”中and 改为 or.
第三排cloths 改为clothes。
第四排第一个字母care 改为careful ;后半句 “and"改为 but
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第1个回答  2013-09-15
good morning, ladies and gentlemen ! I'd like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged for you. For those who wants to ski ,you can rent skis and boots on the spot. Don't forget it can get quite cold in the day , so warm cloths are a must . The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be careful not to get burnt . The hotel is very comfortable, although the nights do get very cold sometimes, so for those looking for another activities, we have prepared lovely walks with good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally I'd like to mention that offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and exotic food .

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第2个回答  2013-09-15
LIKE 后面加TO
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