Telling you a exciting news that it is next Saturday that our team will have a official match in the stadium of our school.
你好!
首先,所给句子确实存在语病。
其次,具体修改参见括号内变化——
【Tell 】you 【a piece of 】news that
it is our team that will have 【an】
official match in the stadium of our
school.
第三,修改原因
Telling 语法没错,但是整体结构不合理,只是一个现在分词短语。改为【Tell】,整体是祈使句,内含同位语从句,强调句型,句子结构上更合理清晰。
news 不可数名词,不能直接用冠词a/an 修饰,但可以用 a piece of 等单位词修饰。
还有,official 是元音音素开头的单词,要用不定冠词 an 修饰。
Telling an exciting news that our team will have an official match next Saturday in the stadium of our school.
(另外,注意两个不定冠词的形式!)
追问就是为了结构复杂
追答为复杂而复杂,也属于病句。