写作思路：根据题目要求，以“对自己影响最大的人”作为主题，比如以学习生涯中一个对自己有帮助的老师作为例子，写出相关事件，最后进行总结，正文；
A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my English teacher in high school, is a shining star in my life.
一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
When I first entered high school, I learned English with great difficulty. I dare not speak English in public, because my pronunciation and intonation are poor, my English scores are poor, and my grammar is a mess.
刚上高中时，我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合说英语，因为我的语音、语调很糟糕，英语成绩很差，语法一塌糊涂。
Afraid of being laughed at, I never raise my hand to answer questions in English class. After discovering my situation, Miss Li extended a helping hand to me and encouraged me.
害怕被嘲笑，所以英语课上我从来不举手回答问题。李老师发现我的情况后，向我伸出了援助之手，并鼓励我。
All this made me improve my English quickly. With her help, I gradually became interested in English and my grades improved.
这一切使我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣了，成绩也提高了。
Miss Li, just like a shining star shining on my way forward.
李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。
《The biggest influence on me》
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The biggest influence on me
——My Father
Everyone around me says my father and I are alike and have the similar personality.It's true that I have much in common with my father,for I have been greatly influenced by him in my life.
I have been working very hard at my study,which is due to my my father's dilligence.When I was in my childhood,my family was poor.In order to raise the family,father worked very hard.He went to the town to work by bike every morning and then came back home very late at night.It was common that I had not seen him for long,for every morning before I got up and went to school,he had left home,and before he returned home from work in the evening I had fallen asleep.I was quite confused that we lived in the same family every day but it was too difficult for us to meet.He was just like a stranger.It was not until that cold day did I understand all.
One moring in a winter,I was very cold.I got up early as usual.When I passed my parents' bedroom,to my surprise,I found father lying in bed,trembling.A bad feeling occured to me.I stepped into the room and asked,“Dad,are you OK?”Hearing that,father turned around and opened his eye with difficulty,“Nothing serious，boy.Just a cold.”“I overslept，and will be late for work.”Father tried to rise and put on clothes quickly.“No，dad.You are ill and should stay at home.”“Good boy,I know but I have to.If I am absent from work today,I won't get paid,and we won't have enough money for your schooling and our life.”Father said,“Boy,we are men who should support the family.You should study hard now and work hard in the future.”What moving words!From that moment I knew why he kept getting so early and returning home so late.I keep the words in mind and do what father told me.
Father always offered his love and care to others,which had great influence on me.Father was also honest,who is my idol.Besides,father never gave up anytime,which told me to be strong,when facing difficulties.
I love my father,a man who has had greatest influence on me in my life.
【译文】
对我影响最大的人
——我的父亲
我周围的每个人都说我的父亲和我一样都有相似的个性。这是真的，我和我的父亲有很多共同点，我已经极大地影响了他在我的生命。
我已经在我的学习很努力的工作，这是由于我父亲的努力。当我在我的童年，我的家里很穷。为了抚养家庭，父亲工作很辛苦，他到镇上工作，每天早上骑自行车，然后回家很晚。这是常见的，我没有时间看到他，每天早晨在我起床去上学，他离开了家，在他下班回家，在晚上我睡着了。我很困惑，我们每天生活在同一个家庭但我们见面太难了。他就像一个陌生人，直到那个寒冷的日子我都懂。
在一个冬天的一天早上，我很冷，我像往常一样早早起床，我通过了我父母的卧室时，让我惊讶的是，我发现父亲躺在床上，浑身发抖。不好的感觉，我想到了。我走进房间，问，“爸爸，你还好吗？“听说，父亲转过身，睁开眼睛很困难，“没什么严重的，boy.just感冒。”“我睡过头了，会迟到。”父亲想站起来，迅速穿上衣服。“不，爸爸病了，应该呆在家里。”“好孩子，我知道但我没有。如果我今天没来上班，我就拿不到工资，我们不会有足够的钱供你读书和生活。”父亲说，“孩子，我们都是男人要养家。你应该努力学习，在现在和未来努力工作。“什么运动的话！从那一刻起，我知道他为什么一直这么早回家这么晚，我把单词记住做什么，父亲告诉我。
爸爸总是给别人给他的爱和关心，这对我有很大的影响。父亲是诚实的，我的偶像是谁。此外，父亲从不放弃任何时候，它告诉我要坚强，面对困难的时候。
我爱我的父亲，一个男人有最大影响的我的生活。
I believe that there must be some teachers who left you a deep impression in your life.
Of course,there has been a teacher in my life who left me a deep impression.
That was my English teacher in my university,Miss Xu.She had a long blonde hair and beautiful eyes.
She was a kind teacher and worked hard.She was far from the school so she had to catch the early bus everyday!
How exhausted.She had not only critic our English homework and take care of her baby.I wasn't intersted in English at than time.She told me to talk in English as much as possible.She asked me not to be afraid of making mistakes because everyone makes mistakes.But she always forgot small things,like her glasses and money!