英文句子纠错

Question

GAC COMMON ERRORS

1. I like food, especially the spicy food.
2. I like listening music.
3. I have worked at AD when I was 17 years old.
4. To watch movies is an interesting thing for me.
5. When I lay down on my bed I realised I didn’t do my homework.
6. Last Saturday I went my best friend’s wedding ceremony.
7. One of my friend isn’t likely to get married.
8. I will probably go to abroad this vacation.
9. I like fast cars. Especially I like Ferraris.
10. I live in department in sixth floor
11. My neighbourhood are very friendly.
12. There are eight persons in our class.
13. My mother and I have same good skins.
14. I like watch cartoons which have an interesting background.
15. It is an interesting thing for Anna to watch movies because it is a way to relax.
16. He likes computers programming.
17. He was died when I arrived.
18. He likes eating spicy food in Sichuan province.
19. She is very crazy about playing basketball.
20. I like playing tennis which made me excited.
21. I like the pop music because the music can make me feel warm when I feel upset.
22. I want to be an independent person who won’t rely on anybody.
23. He likes read science books.
24. Eating spicy food is my favourite particularly Sichuan spicy food.
25. I have ever worked for Adidas.
26. My mother and I have same good skins.
27. I like sport especially playing basketball.
28. She got married with him when she was only 20.
29. He met with accident on his way to home.

老师说这是一些我常犯的错误，可是我不知道怎么改，希望各位老师多多指教。

Answer 1

1. I like food, especially the spicy food.
remove "the"

2. I like listening music.
"listening to"

3. I have worked at AD when I was 17 years old.
"since" NOT "when"
4. To watch movies is an interesting thing for me.
"watching movies"
5. When I lay down on my bed I realised I didn’t do my homework.
"hadn't done my homework"
6. Last Saturday I went my best friend’s wedding ceremony.
went to
7. One of my friend isn’t likely to get married.
my friends

8. I will probably go to abroad this vacation.
go abroad

9. I like fast cars. Especially I like Ferraris.
I like fast cars, especially Ferraris.

10. I live in department in sixth floor
on the 6th floor
11. My neighbourhood are very friendly.
is very friendly
12. There are eight persons in our class.
OK.

13. My mother and I have same good skins.
skin

14. I like watch cartoons which have an interesting background.
I like watching cartoons with interesting backgrounds.

15. It is an interesting thing for Anna to watch movies because it is a way to relax.
Watching movies interests Anna because it is a way to relax.

16. He likes computers programming.
computer programming

17. He was died when I arrived.
had died

18. He likes eating spicy food in Sichuan province.
or "spicy food from Sichuan"

19. She is very crazy about playing basketball.
OK.

20. I like playing tennis which made me excited.
I like playing tennis, which makes me excited.

21. I like the pop music because the music can make me feel warm when I feel upset.

I like pop music because it makes me feel warm when I'm upset.

22. I want to be an independent person who won’t rely on anybody.
does not rely

23. He likes read science books.
reading

24. Eating spicy food is my favourite particularly Sichuan spicy food.

especially
25. I have ever worked for Adidas.
omit "ever"
26. My mother and I have same good skins.
skin
27. I like sport especially playing basketball.
omit "playing"

28. She got married with him when she was only 20.
OK
29. He met with accident on his way to home.
OK.
OR " had" instead of "met with"

Answer 2

1. I like food, especially spicy food.
2. I like listening to music.
3. I began to at AD when I was 17 years old.
4. Watching movies is an interesting thing for me.
5. As soon as I lay down my bed I realised I didn’t do my homework.
6. Last Saturday I took pat in my best friend’s wedding ceremony.
7. One of my friends isn’t likely to get married.
8. I will probably go to abroad this vacation.
9. I like fast cars. Especially Ferraris.
10. I live in a department on the sixth floor
11. My neighbourhood is very friendly.
12. There are eight people in our class.
13. My mother and I have the same good skin.
14. I like watching cartoons which have an interesting background in them.
15. It is an interesting thing for Anna to watch movies because it is a way of relax.
16. He likes computer programm
17. He was dead when I arrived.
18. He likes eating spicy food of Sichuan .
19. She is very crazy about basketball.
20. I like playing tennis which made me exciting.
21. I like the pop music because it can make me feel warm when I feel upset.
22. I want to be an independent person not to rely on anybody.
23. He likes reading science books.
24. Spicy food is my favourite .
25. I have ever worked for Adidas.
26. My mother and I have the same good skin.
27. I like sports especially basketball.
28. She got married with him at the age of 20.
29. He met an accident on his way home.

Answer 3

1. I like food, specially, the spicy food.
2. I like listening to music.
3. I worked at AD when I was 17 years old.
4. Watching movies is enjoyable for me.
5. When I laid down in my bed, I realized I hadn't done my homework.
6. Last Saturday I went to my best friend’s wedding ceremony.
7. One of my friends doesn't like to get married.
8. I probably go oversea this vacation.
9. I like sport cars. I specially like Ferraris.
10. I live on the sixth floor of an apartment.
11. My neighbours are very friendly.
12. There are eight persons in our class.
13. My mother and I have as same as good skins.
14. I like watching cartoons which have an interesting background.(我其实不太明白这句你究竟要表达啥）
15. It is an interesting thing for Anna to watch movies because it is a way to be relax.
16. He likes computer programming.
17. He had died when I arrived.
18. He likes eating spicy food from Sichuan province.
19. She is very crazy about playing basketball.（我觉得你这句没有大错。如果你的意思是指she喜欢篮球这项运动，一般习惯说crazy about basketball。）
20. I like playing tennis because it made me exciting.
21. I like pop music because the music makes me feel warm (换另外一个词吧，warm在这里怪怪的。虽然我是明白你想表达的意思，不过英语母语的人大概听了会糊涂） when I feel upset.
22. I want to be an independent person who don't rely on anybody.
23. He likes reading scientific books.
24. Eating spicy food is my favor, particularly Sichuan spicy food.
25. I have worked for Adidas.
26. My mother and I have same good skins.(之前有了）
27. I like sports especially playing basketball.
28. She married to him when she was only 20.
29. He had an accidence on his way home.

Answer 4

1.the去掉
2.listening to music
3.when 改成 since
4.to watch 改为watching
5.didn't 改为 haven't
6.went to
7.my friends
8.will改为 am
9.应改为： I like fast cars，especially Ferraris.
10.in sixth floor改为 on the 6th floor
11.are 改为is
12.are改为is ,persons改为people
13.skins 改为skin
14.watch 改为watching
15.because改为as
16.computers programming改为 computer games
17.died改为death
18.

Answer 5

when
i
wear
this
scarf,
逗号
which
非谓语从句就算去掉也没影响
which
makes
my
feel
that
my
mother
stands
beside
me
and
supports
me.

Answer 6

Today
I
received
a
call
from
TH
MASON
LOGISTICS
LTD
and
they
adviced
me
to
send
the
goods
to
their
warehouse
for
they
would
arrange
the
shippment
for
me.