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Overseas Study
The discussion about overseas study has never stopped in the past few
years. Letâs have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the
final conclusion.
The biggest advantage of studying overseas is the higher academic level and
advanced research facilities. Whatâs more, by understanding a new culture and
meeting different people, students can develop a more reasonable and balanced
view towards the world. Last but not least, the experience will be invaluable to
character building, which makes most students more independent, diligent and
enterprising.
However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, if a person
does not make full preparations before going abroad, he will have great
difficulty adapting to the new environment. In the second place, the cultural
differences will hinder the regular life in many ways. Finally, money is always
a big problem. Many students have to find parttime jobs to earn money to pay
tuition and fees.
In conclusion, the advantages of overseas study outweigh disadvantages.
Once they return home, the overseas students will make great contributions to
our motherland.
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