用英语帮我写个自我介绍，要求如下....................非常感谢

Question

大家好，我的名字叫闫浩然，今年21岁了，是13级护理七班， 来自山西、 晋中、昔阳。
我喜欢听音乐，同时我也很喜欢运动，像跑步、排球等等。
在学院里我虽是一名普通的学生，不过我很尊敬老师，因为我觉得他们很博学，而且我非常敬佩他们为教育事业做出的努力。
书籍可以开阔我的视野，并且可以给我一些创新的想法。
我最喜欢的一句话就是：一分耕耘一分收获。
在闲暇时间里，我经常跟朋友们交谈发生在生活中的趣事，并且跟她们交流一下将来找工作的就业渠道。
这就是我，一个平凡而又热爱生活的我。
谢谢！
能不能准确一点，靠谱些

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! My name is Yan Haoran. I am 20 years old. I am in Nursing Class 7. I am a sophomore. I come from Xiyang, JInzhong, Shanxi. I like listening to music and love sports,too, such as jogging and volleyball etc. Although I am just an ordinary student, I respect my teachers. I think they are knowledgeable and I appreciate their efforts to education.
Books can open my horizon and give me some creative thoughts.
My favorite motto is : No pains, no gains. In my spare time, I like sharing interesting things with my friends and communicate with them about hunting a job in the future.
This is me, an ordinary young manbut full of passinate toward life!Thank you!

Answer 2

Hello, my name is Yan Hao Ran, 21 years old this year, is in class seven, grade 13 nursing, from Shanxi, Jinzhong, Xiyang.
I like to listen to music, I also like sports, such as running, volleyball and so on.
In the college, I was a student, but I respect the teacher, because I think they are very wise, and I admire their efforts for education.
Books can broaden my horizons, and can give me some ideas.
I like the sentence is: Yifengengyun one harvest.
In my spare time, I often talk about with friends in life, and to communicate with them about the employment channels to find a job in the future.
This is me, an ordinary and I love life.追问

忘记告你了，这个我要背了，最好能详细点，关系到我的分数了，谢谢