有没英语高手,帮忙改下这段话

这段话就10个地方错的!麻烦帮改出来,谢谢!
Plastic bags aren't provide free in the markets ant more.Customers need to pay to them.In my view,the government has started to attch great importance to protect the environment.As we know,plastic bags make our shopping casily and convenient.However,it takes a very long time for it to break down.As a result,they can cause serious pollution,that does greant harm to our surroundings.What's worse,they can be mistakenly used in many way in our daily life.Therefore,I suggested that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags,like paper ones to be more environmentally friendly.Small changes make differencc

Plastic bags aren't 【provided】 free in the markets any more.Customers need to pay【for】them.In my 【opinion】,the government has started to attch great importance to protect the environment.As we know,plastic bags make our shopping 【easy】and convenient.However,it takes a very long time for it to break down.As a result,they can cause serious pollution that does greant harm to our surroundings.What's worse,they can be mistakenly used in many 【ways】in our daily life.Therefore,I suggested that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags,like paper ones to be more 【environment】 friendly.Small changes make differences
这个短文的亮点是作者的英语思维不错,注意表达方式的多样性,缺点是有点罗嗦,细节注意的不足,还可以再简化下。
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第1个回答  2010-08-09
拼写错误太多
1. provided
2. conveniently
3 which brings harm to
第2个回答  2010-08-09
provide - provided

ant more - any more

pay to - pay for

attch - attach

casily - easy

time for it - time for us

that does greant - which

many way - many ways

every one - everyone

differencc - different
第3个回答  2010-08-09
呵呵 写的不错,我给修饰了下。

Plastic bags can't provide for free in the markets any more. Customers need to pay for them. In my view, the government has started to attach great importance to protect the environment. As we know, plastic bags make our shopping easily and convenient. However, it takes a long time for it to break down. As a result, they cause serious pollutions, which do great harm to our surroundings. What's worse, they can be mistakenly used in many ways in our daily life. Therefore, I suggested that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags, like paper ones, which is more environmentally friendly. Small changes make big differences.