求一篇短文六年级的 after school(放学后）

Question

短文至少五句话，按照六年级的学习标准写。写好后要翻译短文汉语意思！急急急急急急~~~~~
选出满意的短文后我另加50分，要快呀~~~ 我不需要别人来教训我，说一大堆废话干吗

Answer 1

I get up at six o’clock every day. After I wash my face and brush my teeth, I begin to review my lessons. I go to school at seven o’clock.
After school is over, I return home. We usually have supper at seven o’clock.Then I begin to do my homework. I want to finish it before I go to bed.
我每天六点起床、洗脸刷牙后，就开始复习功课，七点钟我就去上学。
放学后，我就回家了。我们通常在七点钟吃晚餐，之后我就开始做家庭作业，希望在睡觉前把它做完。

Answer 2

After school,we're going to the park.The park is very beautiful.
We're singing in the park.And we run.we're so happy.
放学后，我们去了公园。公园很漂亮。我们在公园里唱了歌。我们还跑了步。我们很开心。

我写的不好吗？为什么不选我啊？

Answer 3

作文要自己写,别人写的作文是别人的.

Answer 4

对不起 这种忙我帮不上~~~自己学着写 别让别人帮你写 丢人~~~~~~~~~