英语高手英语老师出国留学人士请帮帮我，下面表达有语法错误吗？清华大学北京大学复旦大学学生教授请帮忙
I'm a Grade Two student from Chaoyang No. 4 senior school，
The total score of English single subject test is 150 points，
In each college entrance examination English simulation test，
I always score more than 60，
Poor grades, what should I do?
How do you do to improve my score to about 140 points？
The college entrance examination will be held soon，
Can I still improve my grades?
Hello!
There are only a few mistakes in your
short passage about yourself and your trouble in study. And the following is
the passage with corrections——
I am a student of Grade Two,
Chaoyang No.4 Senior School . The
total points of English single subject
test is 150.However, I only score more than 60 each time in the College
Entrance Examination English
simulation test. Faced with the poor
grades,I feel quite worried and eager to know what I should do with it? What measures should be taken to
help improve my marks to as high as
140? The College Entrance
Examination is approaching , so I am
anxious to know whether I can
improve my English and achieve my
goal? Would you be wise and kind
enough to give me some practical
advice? Thank you very much in
advance.
汉语小结点评:
首先，整体文章表达可以看出，你的英语水平实际上不止你说的六十分，至少也应该在七十五到八十分左右。
其次，你的短文中最明显的失误有两方面——一是有不少的汉式思维表达，你可以参照上面修改后的内容体会。建议多做英语地道阅读和习惯表达积累，逐步培养英语思维。二是句子与句子之间缺少过渡关联词，造成上下句句子意思衔接不紧密。建议采用写日记，写段落等方式，加强篇章写作能力，特别注重关联词应用。
最后，根据你描述的学习上的困扰，建议从以下几方面尝试提高或改善——
第一，树立足够的自信。相信自己能学好并且全身心投入学习。
第二，逐步探索适合自己的行之有效的学习方法。可以尝试朗读【培养语感，积累地道英语表达】，阅读【开阔眼界，拓宽思维渠道，借鉴写作和表达方式】，写作，听力齐抓共管，多管齐下。
第三，针对考试成绩提升，可以尝试【题型专项训练】，各个击破，提升各题型得分，从而提升总分。
第四，他山之石可以攻玉。多向老师请教，多和同学交流，借鉴学习良方，帮助获得优异成绩。
