The training of new employees will be held in Jul

Question

The training of new employees will be held in JulThe training of new employees will be held in July this year for two weeks 这句话正确么？有没有错误

Answer 1

基本正确但时间状语的的顺序应该从小到大排列，改为 The training of new employees will be held for two weeks in July this year (为期两周的新员工的培训将于今年七月举行)。

Answer 2

你好，
句子没有问题。
为期二周的新员工的培训将于今年7月举办。

（新员工的培训将于今年7月举行，为期两周）