范文：Dear Jim
I'm Jim,Yes,you are me.
In ten years,I think I'll be a reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it's really a beautiful city.
As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I'll live in an apartment with my best friends,because I don't like living alone.
I'll have pets.I can't have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I'll have many different pets.
I might even keep a pet parrot!I'll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I'll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekends,I'll be able to dress more casually.I think I'll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.
Yours Jim.
亲爱的吉姆
我是吉姆，是的，你就是我。
十年后，我想我会成为一名记者。我会住在上海，因为我去年去了上海并爱上了它。我认为这真的是一个美丽的城市。作为一名记者，我想我会遇到很多有趣的人。
我想我会和我最好的朋友住在一套公寓里，因为我不喜欢一个人住。我会养宠物。我现在不能养宠物，因为我妈妈讨厌它们，而且我们的公寓太小。
所以十年后，我会养很多不同的宠物。我甚至可能养一只宠物鹦鹉！我可能每天都去滑冰和游泳。在这一周里，我看起来很聪明，可能会穿西装。周末，我可以穿得更随便些。我想我会去香港度假，有一天我甚至会去澳大利亚。
你的吉姆。
英语翻译技巧：
第一、省略翻译法
这与最开始提到的增译法相反，就是要求你把不符合汉语，或者英语的表达的方式、思维的习惯或者语言的习惯的部分删去，以免使所翻译出的句子沉杂累赘。
第二、合并法
合并翻译法就是把多个短句子或者简单句合并到一起，形成一个复合句或者说复杂句，多出现在汉译英的题目里出现，比如最后会翻译成定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等等。
这是因为汉语句子里面喜欢所谓的“形散神不散”，即句子结构松散，但其中的语意又是紧密相连的，所以为了表达出这种感觉，汉语多用简单句进行写作。而英语则不同，它比较强调形式，结构严谨，所以会多用复杂句、长句。因此，汉译英时还需要注意介词、连词、分词的使用。
第三、拆分法
当然，英译汉的时候，就要采取完全相反的战术——拆分法，即把一个长难句细细拆分为一个个小短句、简单句，并适当补充词语，是句子通顺。最后，注意还需要按照汉语习惯调整语序，达到不仅能看懂而且不拗口的目标。
第四、插入法
就是把不能处理的句子，利用括号、双逗号等插入到所翻译的句子中，不过这种方法多用在笔译里面，口译用的非常少。
I'm Jim,Yes,you are me.
In ten years,I think I'll be a reporter.I'll live in Shanghai,because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.I think it's really a beautiful city.As a reporter,I think I will meet lots of interesting people.I think I'll live in an apartment with my best friends,because I don't like living alone.I'll have pets.I can't have any pets now because my mother hates them and our apartment is too small.So in ten years,I'll have many different pets.I might even keep a pet parrot!I'll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week I'll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekends,I'll be able to dress more casually.I think I'll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day I might even visit Australia.
Yours
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