第1个回答 2010-10-22
Hello everybody. I'm very happy I have a opportunity to review my English.And I introduce myself simply.
My name is 邹旭明,thirty-six old. My job is accountancy. My family have six people,my grandfather, father, mother, husband, daughter and me.Even thought my famili's income not very highe,we love each other very much .I love my family,
第2个回答 2010-10-25
Good morning/afternoon/evening, everybody. i feel very glad to have this opportunity to review my English here. Firstly, I will make a brief introduction. My name is ZOU, Xuming, 34, and wortks as an accountant. There are six people in my family, my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother,my husband, my sister, my daughter and I.Though we do not have a high income, we have a warm and harmonious family, a real family. And I love my family.
第3个回答 2010-10-28
Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to be given a chance to review my english. Here, I'd like to make a simple/brief introduction of myself:
My name's Zou xiu ming, 34 years old, working as an accountant. There are six people in my family, grandfather, father, mother, husband, daughter and me. Even though salary income is low in our family, we get along pretty well, it gives me a feel of home, I love my family!
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第4个回答 2010-10-29
Hello everybody:
I am very pleased to have the opportunity to review English
From here, I going make a simple introduction:
My name is Zou Xuming, 34 years old, My work is accounting
My family have six members. Grandfather, father, mother, husband, daughter and me. Although our family income is not high, but family is harmony, can feel the taste of family , I love my family!
This way little bit smoother.
第5个回答 2010-11-05
Everyone good:very happy can have opportunity to relive English, here, I make the introduction of synopsis first:
I call Zhou Xuming, 34 years old, be engaged in accountancy's work.My house includes the 6 people person, grandpa, father, mother, husband, daughter and I.Our house although the income isn't high,the family is in peace and harmony, have much of the flavor of family, I love my family!
感觉可以就加分吧