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last week I went to the Xiangjiang Zoo in Panyu.with my family.The zoo was very big and very beautiful ,the zoo has a lot of animals ,panda,lion,tiger,snake,elephant,fox Collected By Panda ws very cute and very fat.
but it was not my favourite animal.Lion ws very strong ,but it wasn’t my favourite animal either,because it wasn’t very handsome.Tiger ws very strong and very handsome ,it’s my favourite animal,because it’s very strong and very handsome.I feel very happy !
上周我去了番禺的湘江动物园。与我的家人。动物园非常大，非常漂亮，动物园里有很多动物，熊猫，狮子，老虎，蛇，大象，狐狸，熊猫很可爱，很胖，但它不是我最喜欢的动物。
狮子非常强壮，但它也不是我最喜欢的动物，因为它不是很英俊。老虎非常强壮，非常英俊，它是我最喜欢的动物，因为它非常强壮，非常英俊。我感到很高兴!
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last week I went to the Xiangjiang Zoo in Panyu.with my family. The zoo was very big and very beautiful , the zoo has a lot of animals , panda,lion,tiger,snake,elephant,fox… Collected By Panda ws very cute and very fat , but it was not my favourite animal. Lion ws very strong , but it wasn’t my favourite animal either, because it wasn’t very handsome. Tiger ws very strong and very handsome , it’s my favourite animal, because it’s very strong and very handsome. I feel very happy !本回答被提问者采纳
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