请帮我用英语翻译一下面试时的自我介绍,谢谢

各位老师,你们好:
我叫木易,今年18岁。原就读于徐州工业职业技术学院,性格性格开朗活泼;我是一个充满梦想的女孩,有着对未来美好的憧憬;我的爱好是听歌与看书;曾担任过学习委员和学生会干事。经常外出参加一些社会实践活动,如去敬老院孝敬老人、运动会、礼仪服务等等。我希望各位老师给我一次机会,相信我不会让你失望的。

Dear Teachers,
Good morning, I am Mu Yi, 18 years old. I used to study in Xuzhou Vocational Institute of Industry and Techonology. I am an optimistic girl with promising dreams about my own bright future. I love to listen to music and read novels. When I was in school, I held the post of study commissary and secretary in the Students' Union. Evenmore, I have done a great deal of social practices, for example, helping old people in Old Folks' Home, attending the sports meeting, doing ritual servicees and so on. I am looking forward for this opportunity, my respective teachers, and certainly I will not let you down.

根据前面几个人的答案,再改了一些语法错误。
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第1个回答  2010-07-18
Dear Teachers,
Good morning/afternoon, I am Mu Yi, 18 years old. I used to study in Xuzhou Vocational Institute of Industry and Techonology. I am an optimistic and vivacious girl with promising dreams and bright futures. I love appreciating music and reading. When in school, I held the post of study commissary and secretary in the Students' Union. Therefore, I have done a great deal of social practice, for example, helping old people in Old Folks' Home, attending the sports meeting, doing ritual servicees, etc..I look forward to an opportunity from you, my respective teachers, and I will not let you down.
上面有机翻成分的感觉。
第2个回答  2010-07-23
Dear teachers, hello:
I call wood yi, 18 this year. The original attending xuzhou industry vocational and technical college, character cheerful and lively, I am a girl, with full of dreams for the future vision of beautiful, My hobby is listening and reading, Once served as members and students learning. Often attend some social practice activities, such as the elderly, sports filial piety to nursing homes, the etiquette service, etc. I hope you give me another chance, teacher that I won't let you down.
第3个回答  2010-07-18
Teachers, are you: My name is Mu Yi, 18 years old. Originally enrolled in Xuzhou Vocational Institute of Technology, lively personality and cheerful disposition; I am a girl full of dreams, with a beautiful vision of the future; My hobby is listen to songs and reading; has served as member and student learning officer. Often go out to participate in some social practice, such as to honor the elderly nursing home, sports, etiquette services. I hope that the teacher gave me a chance, I believe I will not let you down.
第4个回答  2010-07-18
Dear Teachers:
I'm Mu Yi, 18 years old. Originally enrolled in Xuzhou Vocational Institute of Technology, lively personality and cheerful disposition; I am a girl full of dreams, with a beautiful vision of the future; My hobby is listen to songs and reading; has served as member and student learning officer. Often go out to participate in some social practice, such as to honor the elderly nursing home, sports, etiquette services. I hope that the teacher gave me a chance, I believe I will not let you down..