请人来帮我把这段话翻译成英文？

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尊敬的女士或先生们，您好！
首先非常感谢您的关注。我是一名来自中国的聋哑学生。我在健听人的学校念完了小学和初中的课程，接下来要进入南京聋人高级中学学习高中课程。久闻贵校声名远播不胜向往，关于这所学校，我想向您咨询一些讯息：
1.聋人学校与健听人学校教授课程跨度较大，请问我需要准备一些什么？
2.如果要申请贵校，请问我需要参与什么考试？准备一些什么材料？
3.中国聋人如果要进入贵校就读，需要具备哪些要素才拥有申请贵校的资格？
冒昧打扰非常抱歉，希望您能够帮我解答这些疑惑，非常感激！尽管我是一名聋人，有着无法恢复的身体创伤和缺陷，但是我相信自己并且有坚定的信念。在我和家人共同的努力下我可以流利的说话，还可以演奏乐器，尽管那些声音并不悦耳。我热爱写作，最大的愿望是学习剧本创作。并且我学习美术，有深厚的功底和聋人特有的艺术感知。我会逐步提高自己，争取成为一个独立的人，一个坚强的人，一个生活在主流社会里的人，一个有着独立人格、并且可以依靠自己的力量活下去的人，以及一个有力量保护身边所爱之人的人。请您相信！
向您致意，以最诚挚的祝福。

咳咳，请哪位大神来帮我翻译一下把它们翻译成英文……要求是流畅，语法错误要少、最好没有，以及语气要有礼貌一点。咱也不是一点儿英语也不懂的人，金山词霸什么的就别来显摆了。咱的目的是把这封询问信发到某美国聋人大学，希望大家能理解一下，权当帮帮忙咯~不胜感激！如果写得好的话额外再加分！谢谢谢谢！

Answer 1

看了楼上的，不是机翻就是查字典翻的
完全无法看懂，发出去有损中国人面子 >.<

大神我帮你翻翻。。。

Dear Sir/Mdm,
first of all, i would like to start by saying a big thank you to all of you for your concern which is much appreciated.
i am a disabled student from China. I have received my primary and secondary school education in mainstream schools but i will be entering Nanjing high school for the hearing disabled next for my high school courses after which i look forward to going to the United States and being a part of such a prestigious institution. but in the meantime, i hope to seek some clarification on some issues:

1.There are much differences between a mainstream school and a special school for the hearing disabled in terms of their curriculum. What are some preparations i should make?

2.If i were to apply for XXXX(校名), do i need to sit for any test? And what should i be preparing for the application?

3.Are there any special requirements for the admission of Chinese disables into the school? How do i qualify for application?

i am so sorry for disturbing, but it would be great if you could answer my queries. Thanks in advance!

hearing disability will eventually accompany me for the rest of my life but i am still optimistic and have a lot of faith in myself. under the joint effort from me and my family, i overcame my speech disability and can now speak quite fluently and i can even play music instrument, though i believe i am nowhere near being good at it. I love to write and i aspire to become a scriptwriter. I have studied art and have good foundations and the artistic sense unique to the hearing disabled.
i strive to improve myself and become an independent person with my own personality and a strong will. i shall not be afraid to live in mainstream society and besides working for my own living, i will do my best to look after loved ones. Do have faith in me!

all the best!

yours sincerely,
XXX

手翻，略有修饰，符合你的条件，供参考

注:

首先， 那啥Hello,Ladies and Gentlemen是用在讲话时的，写信不能这样写， 一律用 Dear XXX,

在国外 聋哑/残障/低能 之类的学校都叫 特别学校 special schools

聋 用 hearing disabled 而不是deaf
智障 用 mentally disabled 而非 dumb
那些都属于贬义的，一般礼貌性地不用

参考资料：译苦思甜

Answer 2

Respect the lady or gentleman, hello!
First, thank you very much for your attention. I am a student from China international students. I hear of people in health school through primary and junior high school curriculum, next to nanjing deaf senior middle school learning courses. Your best be heard about this school, I want to ask you some information:
1 the deaf hear people with health school professor of school curriculum span bigger, do excuse me I need to prepare some?
2. If you want to apply for admission, excuse me I need to participate in what exam? Prepare some what material?
3 if we want to enter your Chinese deaf, which requires elements have your qualifications?
Liberty bother very sorry, I hope you can help me solve these doubts, very grateful! Although I am a deaf, cannot restore physical trauma and defect, but I believe in yourself and have strong faith. In the joint efforts of my family and I can speak fluently, can also play an instrument, although those sound not sweet. I love writing, the biggest wish is to learn script writing. And I learn art, has a profound and unique artistic perception deaf. I will gradually improve oneself, to become an independent person, and a strong man and a live in the mainstream of society, an independent personality, and can depend on own strength to live bottom to go to of person, and a force protection of those who loved by the people. Please believe!
With regards to you and best wishes.

Answer 3

Dear Madam or sir, hello!
First of all, Thank you for your attention. I am a deaf student from China. I am hearing people finished the primary and secondary school curriculum, the next to enter the high school learning high school courses in Nanjing for the Deaf. Numerous famous far and wide longing heard so much about your school on this school, I would like to ask you some messages:
1. Deaf and hearing people the school curriculum taught in schools and larger span, what do I need to prepare?
2. If you want to apply for your school, ask what tests I need to participate? What preparation materials?
3. Chinese deaf school if you want to enter your school, what elements need to have your school only has the qualifications to apply?
Venture to disturb very sorry, hope you can help me answer these doubts, very grateful! Although I am a deaf, with no recovery of physical injuries and defects, but I believe and have faith. Me and my family together in the efforts I can speak fluently, you can also play a musical instrument, although that does not sound pleasant. I love writing, the biggest desire is to learn script writing. And I study art, with deep foundation and the perception of art unique to the deaf. I will gradually improve themselves and strive to become an independent person, a strong man, a living person in mainstream society, a country with an independent personality, and can live on its own people, and a force protection around them love human beings. Please believe it!
Greet you in the most sincere wishes.

Answer 4

其实我也就换了个翻译工具罢了

Respect the lady or gentleman, hello!
First, thank you very much for your attention. I am a student from China international students. I hear of people in health school through primary and junior high school curriculum, next to nanjing deaf senior middle school learning courses. Your best be heard about this school, I want to ask you some information:
1 the deaf hear people with health school professor of school curriculum span bigger, do excuse me I need to prepare some?
2. If you want to apply for admission, excuse me I need to participate in what exam? Prepare some what material?
3 if we want to enter your Chinese deaf, which requires elements have your qualifications?
Liberty bother very sorry, I hope you can help me solve these doubts, very grateful! Although I am a deaf, cannot restore physical trauma and defect, but I believe in yourself and have strong faith. In the joint efforts of my family and I can speak fluently, can also play an instrument, although those sound not sweet. I love writing, the biggest wish is to learn script writing. And I learn art, has a profound and unique artistic perception deaf. I will gradually improve oneself, to become an independent person, and a strong man and a live in the mainstream of society, an independent personality, and can depend on own strength to live bottom to go to of person, and a force protection of those who loved by the people. Please believe!
With regards to you and best wishes.

Answer 5

Hello,Ladies and Gentlemen,
First of all,thanks for your concern.I'm a deaf and dumb student from China.I've finished both the primary and junior courses in the school for normal hearing people ,next,I will enter Nanjing High School for the Deaf to hang on my senior courses.I've heard a lot about your school which is famous all over the world,and I'm looking forward to it.Therefore,I want to ask for some information about your school.
1.I know that the courses in the school for the deaf is of great span with the school for the normal hearing people,so please tell me what should I prepare for it.
2.If I want to apply to study in your school,need I attend some exams?And what material should I prepare?
3.What qualities are required to apply for the admission to your school if the deaf from China want to enter your school?

I feel very sorry for bothering you and I hope you can help me answer these questions,I will appreciate you very much.Although I'm a deaf person with unrecoverable physical injuries and defect,I believe in myself and I am always of a firm faith.With the help from my family,I become able to speak fluently,besides,I also can play the musical instrument although it doesn't sound good.I love writing and my greatest hope is to learn the playwriting.In addition,I've been learning to draw pictures,and I'm skilled with the artistic perception proper to the deaf.I will improve myself step by step and make every effort to be the person,independent and strong,living in the mainstream society,with independent personality and can live through with my own effots,and own the power to protect the people I loved around me.Please believe me.

Best regards.

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