用英语怎么向外教表达这些呢？（尽量委婉一点）

Question

1，怎样要求老师改分数呢？

2，老师我想查找一下我的卷子，我想看看我到底那里错了 为什么不及格

3，我感觉非常累 虽然我记忆力不好 可是我很努力

4，感觉大部分题都做了 最少也有70分吧，可是为什么还不及格呢？

5，我仅仅只差1分及格 这个考试对我非常重要，可能就差这1分我就毕不了业

7，我该怎样做您才能给我一分呢？

8，你能多给我一分吗？”

你将会让我通过吗？

万分感谢！

Answer 1

1，is there anything I can do to raise my mark for a pass?

2, can I please check my exam paper for the mistakes i made which caused me to fail?

3, I felt really exhausted, even though my memory is not good, I have done my best

4, I did complete most of the examination questions but why did I still failed? (这里最好不要跟老师说为什么连70分都没有，他可能会生气）

5，I have failed by one mark, on this examination which is crucial to my graduation. It is very important to me.

6,What can I do to get this one mark? It really means a lot to me

7, Please give me one more mark and pass me.

would you please give me a pass for this examination?

I will appreciate this so much!

就一分啊！太不值了，好好和老师说说，外教有的时候不是那么难说话的。态度诚恳一点，多说几个“please" 加油，以上给你的建议自己也采用过，我差3分及格，外教最后给我及格了。加油！

Answer 2

1，make(play)a trick on the mark
2,may i take a look at my paper?i want to check out where i did wrong,why didn't i pass?
3,i feel so tired ,i have a bad memory,but i really tried.
4,it seems i've wrote most of the subject,i thought i can at least got the mark of 70,but i still didn't pass the exam.
5,i only needed one more point to pass,this exam is very important to me, can i graduate or not will all count on this one little point.
7,what would i do( can make) you give me this point?
8can you give me one more mark(point)?
will you let me pass?

i could not thank you more.

Answer 3

外教很有原则性，给不及格肯定有他的理由，一般情况下不会听你的求饶的，呵呵
1 i would appreciate if you let me pass the test
2 sir, I wanna check my paper so that I can know the faults and why I did not pass the test.
3 I feel so exhausted, my memory is bad though I had do my best.
4 I figered out most of the questions and I thought I can get 70 at least, but why I failed?
5 the 1 point is so important for me which caused my failure in the examination, maybe I can't be graduated for the one point, so please!
6 what could I do to make up my mistake?
7 could you please give me one more point? would you let me pass the examination?

Answer 4

1. I would appreciate it very much if you could reconsider the marks of my test.
2. Would you mind letting me have a look at my exam paper, so that I can have an idea of where I did wrong and why I failed the exam.
3. This subject is a challenge to me, I find it hard to keep up with. Although I am not good at remebering thing, I did not give up, instead I put a lot of efforts in it.
4. After the exam I feel like there will be a good chance that I can get 70 since I have completed most of the questions. I would really like to know why the result did not meet my expectation.
5. The exam is extremely important to me,it may affect my graduation oppotunity. It will be really grateful if you could give me an extra point.
7. Is there anything I can do to make up for this 1 point?
8. If there is whould you mind giving me a chance to make up the marks?
9. I would appreciate a lot if you could let me pass.
Thank you enormously.