英语翻译，请高手帮忙修改（中译英是否正确）

Question

1。A：下午好，白天鹅宾馆服务台。有什么可为您效劳吗？
Good afternoon.White Swan.May I help you?
B: 我叫大卫。霍金斯。我下星期二将前入广州参加广交会。不知可否在贵宾馆订间房？
This is David Hawkins.I'm going to GuangZhou to attened Canto Fair on next Tuesday.May I reservation in your hotel?
A：实在抱歉，我们所有的房间都订满了。
Sorry,the rooms are booked up.
B：没关系。再见。
It doesn't matter.Byebye.
C：你好！这里是广州国际大酒店。能为你效劳吗？
Hello,Guangzhou International Hotel.May I help you?
B：我叫大卫。霍金斯。我想在贵宾馆订间房，不知你们是否还有空房？
This is David Hawkins. I'd like to book a room in your hotel.Do you have any vacancies?
C：请稍等，我查一查。霍金斯先生，我们只剩一间单人房和一间双人房。
Just a second.Let me check.Mr Hawkins,we only have one single room and one double room.
B：请问单人房多少钱一晚？
How much is a single room?
C：$200.
$200
B:房里有些什么设备？
What kinds of facilities at the room?
C：房里有中央空调，电话，电视等。
There is air conditioner,phone,TV set.
B：有电脑吗？
Is there a computer?
C：对不起，没有。但是你可以租。
It's not,but you can rent.
B：好吧，我就订那间单人房。
Ok,I'd like to book the single room.
C：你什么时候需要房间，打算住多久？
When would you like to stay here?
B：我下星期一下午到达广州，从星期一住到星期五，一共五个晚上。
I'll arrive on afternoon of next Monday and leave on Friday,five days in all.
C：好的，一间单人房，住五个晚上，从周一到周五。
Ok,a single room,five days in all,starting Monday to Friday.
B：谢谢。
Thanks.
C：不客气。
Not at all.

2.A：您好，客房服务，要帮忙吗？
Hello,Room Service,may I help you?
B：是的，我叫杰克。格林，住2245房。我有些衣服要洗。
This is Room 2245.I have some close need to wash.
A：先生，请把您要洗的衣服放到塑料袋里，然后填份洗衣表格。有人会去取。
Sir,put your close in the plastic bag,and fill out a profile.We'll collect.
B：塑料袋在哪儿？
Where's plastic bag?
A：塑料袋和洗衣表格在您梳妆台右边的第二个抽屉里。
The plastic and landry list are contained in your dresser right the second drawer.
B：我的大衣要干洗，衬衫要水洗，西装要烫。这需要多长时间？
The overcoat is dry-cleaned,the skirt is water washed,the suit is pressed.
A：我想半天就可以了。还有什么吗？
Half of the day.Anything else?
B：请你明天早上6点钟用电话叫醒我，好吗？
I need a wake-up call tomorrow at 6:00.
A：好的。
OK.
B：能否给我送些苹果，香蕉和今天的（中国日报）？
Would you send me some apple,banana and today's China Daily?
A：可以。我们一刻钟后给你送去。
Sure,we'll bring it to you in 15 munites.
B：谢谢。
Thanks.

Answer 1

1。A：下午好，白天鹅宾馆服务台。有什么可为您效劳吗？
Good afternoon.White Swan.May I help you?
B: 我叫大卫。霍金斯。我下星期二将前入广州参加广交会。不知可否在贵宾馆订间房？
This is David Hawkins.I'm going to GuangZhou to attened Canto Fair on next Tuesday.May I reservation in your hotel?（改为 May I book one room in your hotel?)
A：实在抱歉，我们所有的房间都订满了。
Sorry,the rooms are booked up.
B：没关系。再见。
It doesn't matter.Byebye.
C：你好！这里是广州国际大酒店。能为你效劳吗？
Hello,Guangzhou International Hotel.May I help you?
B：我叫大卫。霍金斯。我想在贵宾馆订间房，不知你们是否还有空房？
This is David Hawkins. I'd like to book a room in your hotel.Do you have any vacancies?
C：请稍等，我查一查。霍金斯先生，我们只剩一间单人房和一间双人房。
Just a second（wait one moment 更好 ).Let me check.Mr Hawkins,we only have one single room and one double room.
B：请问单人房多少钱一晚？
How much is a(the ) single room （each night）?
C：$200.
$200
B:房里有些什么设备？
What kinds of facilities at （in）the room?
C：房里有中央空调，电话，电视等。
There is（are） air conditioner,phone,TV set.
B：有电脑吗？
Is there a computer?
C：对不起，没有。但是你可以租。
It's not（Sorry， no have）,but you can rent.
B：好吧，我就订那间单人房。
Ok,I'd like to book the single room.
C：你什么时候需要房间，打算住多久？
When would you like to stay here?（When you will come and how long you will stay ?)
B：我下星期一下午到达广州，从星期一住到星期五，一共五个晚上。
I'll arrive on afternoon of next Monday and leave on Friday,five days in all.
C：好的，一间单人房，住五个晚上，从周一到周五。
Ok,a single room,five days in all,starting (Next) Monday to Friday.
B：谢谢。
Thanks.
C：不客气。
Not at all.

2.A：您好，客房服务，要帮忙吗？
Hello,Room Service,may I help you?
B：是的，我叫杰克。格林，住2245房。我有些衣服要洗。
This is Room 2245.I have some close(clothes) need to wash.
A：先生，请把您要洗的衣服放到塑料袋里，然后填份洗衣表格。有人会去取。
Sir,put your close(clothes) in the plastic(poly) bag,and fill out a profile(and fill the sheet).We'll collect.(we will go to fetch)
B：塑料袋在哪儿？
Where's plastic(poly) bag?
A：塑料袋和洗衣表格在您梳妆台右边的第二个抽屉里。
The (poly bag) and landry list are contained(去掉cantained） in your dresser right the second drawer.（in the second drawer on the right of your dressing table)
B：我的大衣要干洗，衬衫要水洗，西装要烫。这需要多长时间？
The overcoat is dry-cleaned,the skirt(shirt) is water washed,the suit is pressed(need iron).
A：我想半天就可以了。还有什么吗？
Half of the day(Half day ).Anything else?
B：请你明天早上6点钟用电话叫醒我，好吗？
I need a wake-up call tomorrow at 6:00.
A：好的。
OK.
B：能否给我送些苹果，香蕉和今天的（中国日报）？
Would you send me some apple,banana and today's China Daily?
A：可以。我们一刻钟后给你送去。
Sure,we'll bring it to you in 15 munites.
B：谢谢。
Thanks.

Answer 2

1. 第一段广交会写错了.应该是"Canton Fair".
2. "May I reservation in your hotel"错了,"reservation"是名词而非动词.可改为"make a reservation"
3. "There is air conditioner,phone..."应该是"There are"
4. "starting Monday to Friday"应该在"starting"后加个"from"
5. 第二段的"close"应该是"cloth"的误写.
6. "The overcoat is dry-cleaned,the skirt is water washed,the suit is pressed"中,"is"应该用"to be",衬衫应该是"shirt"而非"skirt".本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 3

您好，客房服务，要帮忙吗？
Hello,Room Service,may I help you?
B：是的，我叫杰克。格林，住2245房。我有些衣服要洗。
This is Room 2245.I have some close need to wash.
A：先生，请把您要洗的衣服放到塑料袋里，然后填份洗衣表格。有人会去取。
Sir,put your close in the plastic bag,and fill out a profile.We'll collect
B：塑料袋在哪儿？
Where's plastic bag?
A：塑料袋和洗衣表格在您梳妆台右边的第二个抽屉里。
The plastic and landry list are contained in your dresser right the second drawer.
B：我的大衣要干洗，衬衫要水洗，西装要烫。这需要多长时间？
The overcoat is dry-cleaned,the skirt is water washed,the suit is pressed.
A：我想半天就可以了。还有什么吗？
Half of the day.Anything else?
B：请你明天早上6点钟用电话叫醒我，好吗？
I need a wake-up call tomorrow at 6:00.
A：好的。
OK.
B：能否给我送些苹果，香蕉和今天的（中国日报）？
Would you send me some apple,banana and today's China Daily?
A：可以。我们一刻钟后给你送去。
Sure,we'll bring it to you in 15 munites.
B：谢谢。
Thanks.

Answer 4

C：房里有中央空调，电话，电视等。
There is air conditioner,phone,TV set.后面应该加上and soon
实际上一句汉语用英语可以译出很多种不必太按书上的去做