谢谢热心人,帮我回答这个问题,看看下面这句话有没有语法错误,该句的句子结构合理吗?

They had rushed up to her while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children and tried to steal her handbag.
主语they和后面的tried to 一串,隔太远了,新概念二44课的课文,这样放,觉得别扭

没有语法错误
They had rushed up to her and tried to steal her handbag 是以they为主语的
while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children 是表示 she 的状态
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第1个回答  2012-06-17
必须这样 放
因为 并列谓语 不是 同一个 时态
原句 意思是 They had rushed up to her 。while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children ,they tried to steal her handbag.
否则 就有问题 时态问题 主句用过去完成时 while 从句 用过去进行时 合适吗?
第2个回答  2012-06-15
没有吧=v=
这样看就好了调整一下就不觉得怪了吧
They had rushed up to her and tried to steal her handbag while she was having a picnic at the edge of a forest with her children
虽然意思有那么点小小不同但是这样看就完全能理解了~~哈哈加油
第3个回答  2012-06-15
没有语法错误,因为and的出现作为连词一定要保证前后语法一致原则。此句中的两个动词必须要一致所以是Tried to.英语句子里起解释作用的同位语从句都可以跑很远何况是一个动词
第4个回答  2012-06-15
没有
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