choppy sentence 的定义并举例加以说明

Question

如题所述

Answer 1

多个简单，不连贯的句子。它书写起来比较简单，但是表现出的思路是不连贯的。
比如这段：
She took dance classes.
She had no natural grace or sense of rhythm.
She eventually gave up the idea of becoming a dancer.

合并来说就是
She took dance classes, but she had no natural grace or sense of rhythm, so she
eventually gave up the idea of beco ming a dancer.

Answer 2

断断续续，完整但语意不连贯的句子 缺少连接词but 之类本回答被网友采纳