大一英语改错!

each of the following sentences contains an error in it.point it out and correct it at the end of each sentence.

1. As it was getting warmer inside with the heating, Tom was driving the car with one hand and wiping the window with another.
2. About a third of the students in this class are from Shanghai while the other two-third come from other parts of China.
3. The expected storm never occurred so we had the picnic at all.
4. Just think of it! If you can memorize ten English words everyday, what a big vocabulary you’ll have in a year’s time.
5. Even though I know from my experience that Japanese-style and western-style conversations should be handled by different ways, I still find it no simple matter to switch from one to another.
6. Now that the match is over, we regret we cannot do anything about the score, no matter whether you were fairly treated or not.
7. Just as American men shake hands with each other when first introduced, as a Japanese man bows, showing deep respect for the other person.
8. The team depended too heavily on one player rather than on their teamwork. No wonder why it has dropped this season from where it was at the top.

    1. As it was getting warmer inside with the heating, Tom was driving the car with one hand and wiping the window with another. (another 改为 the other)     表示两者中的另一个 用one...the other的结构

     

    2. About a third of the students in this class are from Shanghai while the other two-third come from other parts of China. ( two-third  改为 two-thirds)    表示分数 分子用数量词 分母用序数词  (当分子大于1的时候 分母要加s即复数形式)

     

    3.The expected storm never occurred so we had the picnic at all. (at all 改为at last )   显然这句话要表达的意思是预报的狂风没有来,所以我们最终还是进行了野餐。只有at last 有最终的意思。

    4.Just think of it! If you can memorize ten English words everyday, what a big vocabulary you’ll have in a year’s time. (think of 改为 think about )     两者都有考虑的意思  但是think about 是指短时间内考虑

    5. Even though I know from my experience that Japanese-style and western-style conversations should be handled by different ways, I still find it no simple matter to switch from one to another. ( by different ways 改为 in different ways)   表示用什么方式\方法 用介词in.

    6. Now that the match is over, we regret we cannot do anything about the score, no matter whether you were fairly treated or not. (在 we regret后面加上that )  当宾语从句较长时 不能省略引导词that.

     

    7. Just as American men shake hands with each other when first introduced, as a Japanese man bows, showing deep respect for the other person. (去掉 a Japanese前面的as)  前半句中已经有了as ,这个as 管所有并列的部分 所以重复了

    8. The team depended too heavily on one player rather than on their teamwork. No wonder why it has dropped this season from where it was at the top. (将no wonder后面的why去掉) no wonder 是难怪 、怪不得的意思 why在这里多余了。

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第1个回答  2012-09-29
1. with the other
2.two-thirds
3. at last
4.think about
5.in different ways
6.regret that
7.去掉后半句的as
8.去掉why本回答被网友采纳