高二英语短文改错

Question

A thirst bee wen to a river to drink，and was carried（2行）away by the run water。A kind bird picked a leave off a tree and(3行）threw into the water in front of the bee。the bee was able to climb(4)onto the leaf，and brought safely to the land。the bee thanked the(5)bird for its kindness and then flew away。not long after，the bird was(6)sitting on a branch while a man began to aim his gun at it。but(7)the bee saw that the man was doing 。so it flew into the man's eye(8)and hurt him。the pain was so great that he was not able to shoot at(9)the bird，and the bird flew away 。in the away。the bee whose life had(10)been saved by the bird，and was able to save life of the bird。

Answer 1

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A (thirst改成thirsty) bee wen to a river to drink, and was carried away by the (run改成running) water. A kind bird picked a leave off a tree and threw (加入it) into the water in front of the bee. The bee was able to climb onto the leaf, and brought safely to the land. The bee thanked the bird for its kindness and then flew away. Not long (在after后面加入that 或 把after改成later), the bird was sitting on a branch (while改成when) a man began to aim his gun at it, but the bee saw (that改成what) the man was doing. So it flew into the man's eye and hurt him. The pain was so great that he was not able to shoot (去掉at) the bird, and the bird flew away. in the away. The bee whose life had been saved by the bird, (去掉and) was able to save (加入the) life of the bird.

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Answer 2

A thirsty bee went to a river to drink，and was carried away by the running water。A kind bird picked a leave off a tree and threw it into the water in front of the bee。the bee managed to climb onto the leaf，and brought safely to the land。the bee thanked the bird for its kindness and then flew away。not long after，the bird was sitting on a branch while a man began to aim his gun at it。but the bee saw what the man was doing 。so it flew towards the man's eye and hurt him。the pain was so great that he was not able to shoot at the bird，and the bird flew away 。the bee whose life had been saved by the bird，managed to save the life of the bird。

Answer 3

A thirst(thirst改成thirsty) bee wen to a river to drink，and was carried（2行）away by the run(run改成running) water。A kind bird picked a leave off a tree and(3行）threw into the water in front of the bee。the bee was able to climb(4)onto(onto改成on) the leaf，and brought safely to the land。the bee thanked the(5)bird for its kindness and then flew away。not long after（加that），the bird was(6)sitting on a branch while（while改成when） a man began to aim his gun at it。but(7)the bee saw that（that改成what） the man was doing 。so it flew into the man's eye(8)and hurt him。the pain was so great that he was not able to shoot at（去掉at）(9)the bird，and the bird flew away 。in the away。the bee whose life had(10)been saved by the bird，and（去掉and） was able to save （加one）life of the bird。