谁帮我写一篇英语作文啊?给笔友介绍我的家乡-江城。。。急啊

自然情况:位于长江边,风景优美,适合居住。
成就:经济发展快,新建了不少工厂,住房,道路等。
存在问题:水,空气污染严重,交通堵塞……

加上自己的意见…
跪求高手!!!今天就要啊~

Dear某某:
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It’s a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future
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第1个回答  2012-09-26
Great change in my hometown
As time goes by,my hometown has had the great change.
Instead of winding road, the street is bright and spacious.The trees along the street is more and more beautiful.The cars which are running on the street has become more and more advanced.Whether to eat or wear make people feel fresh and new.In my hometown,not only the building has become tall,but also the air become fresh.I see everyone's face seems to be showing a satisfied smile.
This is my hometown.I love my dear hometown.
第2个回答  2020-07-29
Dear某某:
It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.
The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It’s a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future