中译英翻译~几句话而已!!!!!在线等!!!!!!!!!!!!

下面这段话翻译成英文,求准确礼貌诚恳
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非常感谢您的回信和通过我defer OFFER的申请,不过我没弄懂您的意思,我需要在2012年完成LCF在UCAS的规定(雅思,交齐学费和住宿费),还是在2013年完成这些规定?

还有我可以申请延期到明年1月份入学吗?因为我的实习工作可能不需要一年的时间。

非常感谢您的回信和通过我defer OFFER的申请,不过我没弄懂您的意思,我需要在2012年完成LCF在UCAS的规定(雅思,交齐学费和住宿费),还是在2013年完成这些规定?

还有我可以申请延期到明年1月份入学吗?因为我的实习工作可能不需要一年的时间。

Thank you so much for your reply and acceptance of my defer offer application. However, I'm unclear on two issues. Do I need to complete all the LCF requirements for UCAS (take the IELTS, pay tuition and board fees), or do I have until 2013 to complete them?

I'm also wondering if it's possible to apply for an extension to enter school in January of next year? I realized my internship might not take one year.

我觉得这样翻译比较地道。

自己认真翻译的,有问题请追问、希望及时采纳—— ♥ 多谢 ⌒_⌒
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第1个回答  2012-08-07
Dear Excellency,
Thank you for your reply and through my defer OFFER application,but I have some unclear places need to consult you.I need to meet the requirements which LCF in the UCAS( IELTS, paid the tuition and accommodation fees ), or finished them in 2013?

Can I apply for an extension to the university in January next year? Because of my practice may not take a year.本回答被网友采纳
第2个回答  2012-08-07
Thank you for replying and accepting the defer offer. However, I am not quite understand that whether I have to complete LCF in the conditions of UCAS (IELTS,tuition fee and the charge of resident) by the year of 2012 or 2013. And I intend to know if I can apply for extending matriculation to Noverber 2013 since I may not need a year for intership.
第3个回答  2012-08-07
Thank you for your reply and through my defer OFFER application, but I didn't understand what you mean, I need to be completed by 2012 LCF in UCAS regulations ( IELTS, paid their tuition and accommodation fees ), was completed in 2013 the rules?And I can apply for an extension to the school in January next year? Because of my practice may not require a year.
第4个回答  2012-08-08
Thank you very much for your letter and through the I defer OFFER application, but I didn't understand your meaning, I need to complete in 2012 in the provisions of the UCAS LCF (ielts, paid, tuition and accommodation), or completed in 2013 the rules?
And I can apply for an extension to January entrance? Because my practice job may not need a year's time.