问个有关英语的语法问题

Question

1. everyone lives in this town seems hate me.
2. everyone living in this town seems hate me.
哪个是对的，还是都是对的，如果都是对的，区别是什么，求讲解，谢谢。

Answer 1

问个有关英语的语法问题
1. everyone lives in this town seems hate me.
2. everyone living in this town seems hate me.
哪个是对的，还是都是对的，如果都是对的，区别是什么，求讲解，谢谢。
答：两句话都是错句。
析：1. 主语是Everyone, lives in this town是谓语，seems是谓语动词，hate还是谓语动词，一个主语，三个谓语动词，没有任何的连词连接。
2. living in this town为现在分词短语作后置定语，主语还是Everyone, 但seems 和hate 是两个谓语动词。应改成：seems to hate me 就对了。
还有一种改法：
It seems that everyone in this town hates me.
living in this town (生活在这个城镇的）可以简化为介词短语in this town (在这个城镇的）
译：改后的2句：生活在这个城镇的每一个人好象都不喜欢我。
最后一句：好象这个镇的所有人都不喜欢我。追问

seem to 那个我知道错了，我主要想问的是能不能 主语直接加ing形式来修饰他，就像everyone living in this town hates me.
还是说一定要everyone who lives in this town hates me. 我知道这句肯定是对的，但是就是不知道这里的who能不能省略？

追答

答：在定语从句中作主语的关系词是不能省略的。Everyone lives in this town hates me. 是错的。
现在分词短语是可以作后置定语的。Everyone living in this town hates me. 是正确的。
相当于：Everyone who lives (/are living) in this town hates me.
这并不是简单地省略了who.

Answer 2

2对
这是个简单句；英语的句子一般来说一个主语对应一个谓语，这个句子的谓语是：seems
另外一个动作只能一非谓语形式出现，living in the town 是everyone 的后置定语

Answer 3

第二个，因为一个句子里只能有一个谓语，第一个句子里“live"和”seem"都是谓语，语法错误。可以改为Everyone who lives in this town seems hate me.

Answer 4

everyone是不定代词，做主语谓语用单数。所以1是对的。2也是对的。