第1个回答 推荐于2017-09-07
高考英语满分作文-租房
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
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译:
我很高兴收到你的信，我很高兴地听到你会去中国且在我们这里学习中文的消息。我已经找到了寓所。在芳草街，不远处就是我们的中文学校。乘坐11号巴士就可以到达，前一站就是中文学校。寓所是在三楼,有3个房间，其中一个是卧室，其他两个卫生间和厨房。有一张床，一个沙发和一个办公桌，25平方米小公寓里有椅子，租金是每月500元。也许这房子不如你的愿望，但我会尽我所能，满足您的需求。如果还不够，给我写信，我会寻找另外一个更好的地方。
希望你能很快来到这里！
就到这里啦！
此致，
李华
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.Where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。
6.Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.A fall into the pit，a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
8.Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。
10.Beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
11.More hasty，less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
13.All that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.Look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.Great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun，half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.It is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.Out of sight，out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。
21.Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.Call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.First things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.Ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat，but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。
27.Action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.East or west，home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.Its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.Beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.Like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
34.An idle youth，a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
35.As the tree，so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
36.To live is to learn，to learnistobetterlive.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着本回答被提问者采纳
第2个回答 2009-05-10
应用文的关键在于要有正确的格式，常见的高考应用文一般是信件，也有通知，发言搞等。信件又分为感谢信，道歉信，投宿信，求知信等。掌握这些信件的格式很重要，同时记住一些固定的模式也可以锦上添花。常见句型有：
1．I am grateful to you for…
2. I take this opportunity to express to you deep appreciate for the kind assistance you rendered me.
3. it was kind and generous of you to do this for me and I do appreciate more than I can say.
4. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for…
5. I am terribly sorry for what I have done.
6. please forgive me.
7. I must apologize to you…
8. I regret to inform you that I am unable to do…
9. please accept my apologies for… once more.
10. I am pleased to invite you to attend…
11. it’s my pleasure/a great honor for me to invite you to…
12. It is with great pleasure that I invite you to…
13.I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.
14.we are looking for forward to seeing you soon.
15.I hope that you won’t decline my invitation.
16.I am writing to you to complain about…
17.There are some problems with me… that I wish to bring to attention. First, …In addition,…
18.I can hardly put up with it any more.
19.If it is not properly settled, I would…, or I would…
20.I would like some detailed information on/ about……
21.I shall be grateful if you could let me have details of …
22.I wish to apply for the position of which you advertised in…
23.I have learned from a friend of mine that your company is looking for…
24.I am very interested in exploring a position as a …with your company.
25.I graduated from…in…
仔细读题，注意不同应用文的格式。
Example10:
据报道，七岁女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Army收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美元的治疗款。
假如你是新化中学的学生李华，请你用英语给Army写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：
自我介绍
得知的情况
表示鼓励
打算为她做什么
祝她早日康复
注意：
1．信的格式已为你写好。
2．信中不得出现你的真实情况。
3．词数100左右。
4．请在答题卡上答。
Dear Army,
I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.
At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.
I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you. Which may help you. It will give more courage to live on.
Yours,
LiHua
Example11:
请你用英文写一篇日记，内容包括以下要点：
1．晨起不适，头痛，发烧；体温高达39℃ ；
2．估计病因：昨天上学时未带伞，回家路上淋了雨，可能因感冒引起发烧。
3．服药，大量饮水，卧床休息，下午好转。
要求：1. 日期及气候情况: 四月二十一日 星期五雨;
1. 词数: 110左右
April21 Friday Rainy
I didn’t feel well when I got up this morning. I had a headache, I took my temperature and Found it was 39℃. As a result, I couldn’t go to school and had to stay at home.
It was very cold yesterday, and it was raining heavily too. At that time, I didn’t take my umbrella with me, so I was caught in the rain on my way home. I thought I must have got a bad cold. So I took some medicine and drank lots of water. I stayed in bed the whole day. In the afternoon, I began to feel better.
Example12:
请根据下面内容给学生会写一个讲座通知,提前两天张贴到广告栏上.
1. 地点: 学校科学会堂.
2. 时间: 本周六下午2时开始,大约需两个小时
3. 主讲人: 中山大学野生动物研究中心的教授王海波同志
4. 演讲题目: 为何以及如何保护野生动物
5. 讲座后自由发言
6. 注意事项: 100词左右; 可适当增减细节以使文章连贯;
参考词汇: 科学会堂 the Science Hall; 中山大学野生动物研究中心 the Research Center of Wild Animal of Zhongshan University
NOTICE
There will be a talk on “Why and How to Protect Wild Animals” in the school Science Hall at two o’clock this Saturday afternoon. The speaker is Professor Wang Haibo, who comes from the Research Center of Wild Animals of Zhongshan University. It will last for about two hours. After that, you are free to express your opinion.
Everyone is expected to take part in the activity. Remember to enter the hall at ten to two and make careful notes while you listen to the talk.
Thursday
The Students Union
Example13:
高三年级一班和二班之间将在5月4日举行一次有关环保问题的演讲比赛(an talk show on environment protection), 为帮助同学做准备, 二班将邀请清华大学的李博士做相关内容的报告.假如你是二班的班长,请你根据以下提示拟一份有关报告会的口头通知.
1. 报告内容: 近年北京的环保工作已取得进步.
2. 地点: 教学楼三楼会议厅
3. 时间: 4月30日, 星期三, 下午两点.
4. 目的: 帮助大家收集信息, 为演讲做好准备.
5. 参加人员: 全班同学
6. 其他安排: 会后讨论
Boys and girls:
May I have your attention please?
As you know, our class will have a talk show on environment protection with Class One on May4th, and before that we will invite Dr Li from Qsinghua University to give us a talk on the improvement in environment protection in Beijing in recent years.
The talk will begin at 2:00 pm on Wednesday, April 30th in the auditorium on the third floor of the teaching building. I’m sure we can get enough information from this talk and make good preparations for the coming talk show. After the talk, we will have a discussion. Everyone should be there on time.
That’s all. Thank you.
Example14:
(2007江苏卷)2007年4月29日上午10点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。
教育部提倡：
每天锻炼一小时
健康生活五十年
幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言搞，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：
（1） 发言搞应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
（2） 词数：120左右。发言搞的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
（3） 参考词汇：阳光体育活动 a national sports program;
教育部 the Ministry of Education
Good afternoon, everyone,
Thank you
Good afternoon, everyone.
On the morning of April 29,2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of students from primary , middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.
The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.
Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise. It is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up body and keep a clear mind. Therefore, we can work more efficiently.
Thank you!
应用文常考的是书信、电子邮件、日记、通知等，其他应用文请同学们自己一下。
可以把我们写作时的要领编成顺口溜，请看：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏，写日记同汉语；书信、通知格式要牢记。看清图表细输理，写人记事按顺序；打草稿查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。
第3个回答 2009-05-10
Dear Cathy，
I am writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you， for I have just heard that you were depressed because you couldn't afford the best（famous） brands.
I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image. And it is true that stylish clothes， shoes or something like those will make one more fashionable and eye-catching. However， everybody has his（her） own family background， and it is really extravagant for you to buy the famous brands. Besides， it will also add to the burden of your parents.
What's more， beauty is just skin deep. There are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge， noble character and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect and admiration. Good qualities are the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear.
Never judge a person by the appearance. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be.
Yours，Jane
亲爱的凯蒂，我写信给你分享我的意见的方式与你，我刚才听到你沮丧，因为你买不起最好的（著名）品牌。我说，这是很自然的每个人都付出非常重视自己的形象。这是真正的时尚衣服，鞋或者类似的东西将使这些人更多的时尚和抢眼。
然而，每个人都有他（她）自己的家庭背景下，这确实是奢侈的为您购买知名品牌。此外，它也将增加的负担，你的父母。更重要的是，美只是表象。有很多事情可以让你与其他流行时装除外。大量的知识，崇高品格和热情心一定会赢得别人的尊重和钦佩。
良好的素质是珍惜您的生命更宝贵的是比你穿什么。
从来没有一个人法官的出现。我希望你会记得的说法，并成为高兴你用的。