第1个回答 2009-04-06
Good morning professors，
Well, first, I’ll make a simple[brief] self-introduction. My name is wang [and I am] from [Fosan] University. As to[for] fosan, it is famous for ceramic(陶瓷) industry, [also,] it is the hometown of huang feihong,a household[famous] name thronghout China because of his Chinese gonghu[Kong Fu]. fanshan is a beautiful city [with] a long history, [while] I am from a poor mountainous [town] of Sichuan province,[therefore],I made up my mind to go out to make a big business[delete,]when I was a child.
In my spare time, I [usually read a lot] ,especially biographies (bai'ɔɡrəfi)of famous people . These kind of books can teach me how to be a reasonable person and a winner in life . I like listening to music as it can make me comfortable and calm [delete down] to think something over .My favorite sports is basketball ,although I am very thin[slim or skinny] . I think [life in just like a basketball game]. No one knows who will win until [the end].
Generally speaking ,I am a diligent student especially when doing [delete the] things that I like. I am interested in Civil Engineering ,so I [am trying] my best to do it. With this interest, I entered Foshan University to study Civil Engineering . During my four-year education, I have learnt some principles['prinsəpl] and knowledge of my major and [I] want to make further investigation[research?] on them. So I have decided to pursue[take] a further study in Geotechnical Engineering [in Middle and Southern University], And[as] it is one of the most famous university[universities] in Civil Engineering. I love the feeling in this university. It is full of youthful spirit. And I am deeply attracted by the academic atmosphere. So I [have been longing] for becoming a student here and I am looking forward to having myself improved after 3 years study here.
This is my first time come[cpming] to Central South University, but actually, I have [been dreaming] that in my heart more than four years .And now, I’m [delete coming] here, I [have made it] here to continue [delete to persue] my dream. Hope [you all enjoyed my speech and have a good one/day]!
That’s all. Thank you!
第2个回答 2009-04-06
Good morning professors，
Well, first, I’ll make a simple self-introduction. My name is wang , coming from the fosan University. As to fosan, it is famous for its ceramic(陶瓷) industry, and it is also the hometown of huang feihong,a household name thronghout China because of his awesome Chinese gonghu. （此处删去一句）
I am from a poor mountainous towm of Sichuan province,therefor ,I made up my mind to go out to make a big business in my childhood.
In my spare time, I like reading ,especially those biographies of famous people . These kind of books can teach me how to be a reasonable person and a winner in life . I like listening to music as it can calm me down to ponder over something .My favorite sports is basketball . I think a basketball match is just like the life . No one knows who will win until it ends.
Generally speaking ,I am a diligent student especially when doing the things that I like. I am interested in Civil Engineering ,so I will try my best to do it. With this interest, I entered Foshan University to study Civil Engineering . During my four-year education, I have learnt some principles and knowledge of my major and want to make further investigation into them. So I have decided to pursue a further study in Geotechnical Engineering. And Middle and Southern University is one of the most famous university in Civil Engineering. I love the feeling in this university. It is full of vigorious spirit. And I am completey attracted by the academic atmosphere. So I long for becoming a student here and I am looking forward to having myself improved after 3 years study here.
This is my first time came to Central South University, but actually, I have been hoping for that in my heart more than four years .And now, I’m coming here, I’m coming here to continues to pursue my dream. Hope fellow dear teachers healthy, and also my dream come true!
That’s all. Thank you!
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第3个回答 2009-04-06
Good morning，professors，
Well, first, I’ll make a brief self-introduction. My name is wang and I'm from Fosan University. As to fosan, it is famous for ceramic(陶瓷) industry, and it is the hometown of Huang feihong,a household name thronghout China for his Chinese gongfu. Foshan is a beautiful city with a long history.My hometown is a poor mountainous town in Sichuan province. I have made up my mind to go out to make a big business since I was a child.
In my spare time, I like to read books,especially biographies (bai'ɔɡrəfi)of famous people . These kind of books can teach me how to be a reasonable person and a winner in life . I like to listen to music as it makes me feel comfortable and calm down to think something over. Although I am not strong, my favorite sport is basketball. I think basketball game is like the life. No one knows who will win until it ends.
Generally speaking ,I am a diligent student especially when doing the things that I enjoy. I am interested in Civil Engineering,so I try my best to do it. With this interest, I entered Foshan University to study Civil Engineering. During my four-year education, I have learnt some principles['prinsəpl] and knowledge of my major and want to do further research on them. So I have decided to pursue a further study in Geotechnical Engineering. And Central South University is one of the most famous universities in Civil Engineering. I love the feeling in this university. It is full of youthful spirit. And I am deeply attracted by the academic atmosphere. So I'm eager to become a student here and looking forward to having myself improved after 3 years of study here.
This is my first visit to Central South University, but actually, I have hoped for that in my heart more than four years. And now, I’m coming here, I’m coming here to pursue my dream. Wish fellow dear teachers healthy, and also my dream will come true!
That’s all. Thank you!
第4个回答 2009-04-06
LZ牛人，我是本科生，来膜拜一下，希望你考研胜利，顺便告诉你，建议你去一个专业点的网站....这里的高人并不是灰常多的本回答被提问者采纳