写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
Hello，my name is Jie.I have many good teachers，but my favourite teacher is Miss Li.She is a very good teacher.
She is very young，but her English is very good.She teaches us English every day.Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us，plays games with us.
We are so happy .And we learn English well.Our English are very very good.So I like her very much. She likes reading books and playing sports.After class，Miss Li often plays sports with us.We are very happy.
We all love her very much. This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much.
What about you？Do you have a good teacher，too？
翻译
嗨，我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师，但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。她很年轻，但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语，她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌，和我们一起玩游戏．我们非常快乐幸福，我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。
所以我非常喜欢她。她喜欢读书和运动。下课后，李老师经常和我们一起运动，我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师，我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢？你也有一个好老师吗？
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2、写作并非一朝一夕就能成功之事。但面对当今的应试教育，你不妨学会一些技巧。比如，平时多背一些好的段落、好的开头及结尾。以备考试用之。
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Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.