帮忙做一下改错被，顺便解释一下。。

Question

Dear Sir,
i,m glad to recommend him to you.Igraduated at Xinhua Primary School in1992.when i was in middle school,i did good in maths,physics and chemistry and was fond of the art.After leaving No.1 High School,I entered Beijing Normal University study physics.After four year of hard work there,i went to the United States for farther study.Because of my excellent work,i get a doctor’s degree in physics this year but i’d like to make contributions to our country.
looking forward to receive your early reply.

Answer 1

为你解答：

 

I'm glad to recommend 【him 改成 myself】 to you. I graduated at Xinhua Primary School in 1992. When I was in middle school, I did 【good 改成 well】 in maths, physics and chemistry and was fond of ã€the 删除】art. After leaving No.1 High School, I entered Beijing Normal University 【study 前面加入 to】 physics. After four 【year 改成 years】 of hard work there, I went to the United States for 【farther 改成 further】 study. Because of my excellent work, I 【get 改成 got】a doctor’s degree in physics this year, but i’d like to make contributions to our country.
Looking forward to 【receive 删除】 your early reply.

 

解释：

这是自荐信，是推荐自己，所以him 改成myself

短语do well in，副词well才能修饰动词do，所以good改成well

“艺术”是art，不需要定冠词

进入Beijing Normal University（北师大）的目的是学习物理，所以study之前加入to，动词不定式表示目的

“四年” four years

“继续深造” further study

我获得了博士学位，应该用过去式，所以get 改成 got

短语 look forward to 后接名词或动名词，因为to 是介词，那么receive就删除

 

 

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Answer 2

,i did good in maths改为i did well in maths four year 改为 four years i get a doctor’s degree 改为i got a doctor’s degree entered Beijing Normal University study 改为entered Beijing Normal University to study physics