大家可以帮我写一篇一般过去式的英语文章吗?(至少十句)我是六年级的小学生,希望不要太深奥。谢谢!

很急。谢谢!最好是原创的。

yesterday,i went to the animal zoo with my parents.i enjoyed a lot there.because i saw so many animals which i could see in daily life.i saw the snake,and it was very large.and i also saw lots of monkeys.they played with each other.and i felt so happy when i saw them playing.there were also many other animals there.i spent almost a whole day there.my parents said they would bring me there again.i was so excited.it was a very happy day for me.
你再稍微修改一下吧,我已经尽可能写的简单一点了。希望能帮到你。
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第1个回答  2011-03-11
I went shopping with my mother last weekend . My mother bought many clothes for me . I loved them very much . Of couse , i asked my mother to buy the toys i wanted . I had a good time at then . Then we went to the zoo . I saw many animals such as seahorse , turtle , shark and so on . And the panda was very beautiful . I enjoyed my weekend .
第2个回答  2011-03-11
Yesterday,when I went to school ,I saw a small dog .Its leg was hurt by a knife. It was so dear,so I brought it home,and I was late for school. When I told my teacher ,she didn't angry and smiled to me.