怎样写好初三英语作文?我平常考试总得10、11、12分怎样考的更好!

如题所述

写作文无非就是让某些句子、某些词入老师的眼,则就要平常我们积累,比如说:
Many people insist that...
很多人坚持认为...
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that...
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为...
A lot of people seem to think that...
很多人似乎认为...
引出不同观点:
People's views on... vary from person to person. Some hold that... . However, others believe that....
人们对...的观点因人而异.有些人认为.....然而其他人却认为...
People may have different opinions on...
人们对...可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to...
关于.... 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).
对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾部分
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that...
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论...
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that...
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论...
Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that...
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论...
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without... But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有...是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...
该是采纳...的建议,并对...的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...
毫无疑问,对...问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that...
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是...
Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that... will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that...
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会...
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证部分
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that... 我无法完全同意这一观点....
Personally, I am standing on the side of ...就个人而言,我站在...的一边.
I sincerely believe that... 我真诚地相信...
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do ... than to do....
在我个人看来,做...比做...更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why...
坦诚地说,最后,还有一个较为实际的原因,_________。
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, ... Second, ... Third, ...
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, ... 第二, ... 第三, ...
Why did... ? For one thing... For another.... Perhaps the primary reason is...
为什么会...? 一个原因是... 令一个原因是...或许其主要原因是....
I quite agree with the statement that... the reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即...,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling... 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is... 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是...
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, .... 就某事而言,...
It was obvious that... 很显然,....
It may be true that..., but it doesn't mean that... 可能...是对的,但这并不意味着...
It is natural to believe that... , but we shouldn't ignore that... 认为....是很自然的,但我们不应忽视....
There is no evidence to suggest that... 没有证据表明...
作文中常用连接词的选择
表示强调的连接词
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
表示比较的连接词
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
表示对比的连接词
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
表示列举的连接词
for example, for instance, such as, take ...for example. Except (for), to illustrate.
表示时间的连接词
later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
表示顺序的连接词
first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
表示可能的连接词
presumably, probably, perhaps.
用于解释的连接词
in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
表示递进的连接词
What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
表示让步的连接词
although, after all, in spite of..., despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
表示转折的连接词
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately. whereas
表示原因的连接词
for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
表示结果的连接词
as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
用于总结的连接词
on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
其他类型连接词
Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
图表作文常用句型
As is shown in the graph... 如图所示...
The graph shows that... 图表显示...
As can be seen from the table,... 从表格中可以看出...
From the chart, we know that... 从这张表中,我们可知...
All these data clearly prove the fact that...
所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即...
The increase of .... In the city has reached to 20%...
在这个城市的增长已达到20%.
In 1985, the number remained the same.
1985年,这个数字保持不变.
There was a gradual decline in 1989.
1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况追问

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第1个回答  2011-03-19
是20分作文还是15的,如果是20分的,说明你基础不好,你可以分三部分写(可以在一段中),先总的一句,然后找几个例子支持第一句,最后在总结一下。我们老师当初说,辞藻不用 太华丽,首先保证语法正确,拼写错误极少,不离题,得及格分,多几个从句,又正确,15,16一般有了,那时你再努力用几个让老师影响深刻的词(可以是很难的,但是保证拼对,用对;也可以是简单的词语活用,这个更好)
如果是15分的作文,就直接跳到最后一步,注意用词和句型。
希望有用追问

总分是15!我感觉我写的句子新颖!可总是得不到高分?

追答

句子要用对语境。你们学被动句了没?有些题目,比如如何保护环境,你如果总是“我们应该……”会单调,主动句和被动句交叉使用。
有时长句和短句交替。一般总起那句精炼一点,后面接两句长的或复杂的,再来几句短的。
或者立意不够,用词不活不新。你可以拿几篇文章问一下老师,请老师指点一下
根据个人经验,如果总是12分,确实很难再明显提升
强烈建议咨询老师,比我没看过你文章给的比较泛的建议好。或许你可以发几篇到我邮箱
[email protected]

追问

恩!我把我一模的试卷作文发给你!

追答

突然想到你字迹如何?字写得漂亮,分数也不会太低
现在3.26 12:50,没收到邮件

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第2个回答  2011-03-19
呃 满分多少.. 我们满分才10. 我一般9分.. 10分很难得..在中考中.. 不过估计我自己也是总是出些低级错误的原因。。 其实就是被几个短语几个句型的事儿。

我喜欢用的昂:
【take an active part in 积极参加 】 (写什么积极参加某某活动)
【make use of / take advantage of 利用...】(这个我们很多同学都不知道啥意思 所以我就比较吃香了,每次都用,变着法子套就可以。 比如好好利用这个暑假.)
【lose oneself 】沉迷于/陶醉于 (介绍人的时候写她沉迷于音乐等,说网络游戏时就写一些孩子沉迷于网络)
【protect from 保护..免受..】 (写保护环境,动物,还有父母保护我们免受伤害...)
【in a word 总之 】 结尾用 一般文章都能用得上
【to one‘s joy /surprise 令某人高兴/惊讶的是 】

最后加几个简单句。 最后用个什么简单点的定语从句啊什么的。 宾语从句大家都会用...随口就来,很顺的。 定语从句有的人就闹不清楚 最好用那种连接词作状语的情况... 但一定要保证正确啊..
第3个回答  2011-03-21
初三么 简单来西的 只要把写的作文不要有语法错 写完后好好地读一遍 就好了
如果觉得自己语言不漂亮 就稍微背一点文章 既然背就要背熟 否则背得模棱两可 写出来极有可能是不正确的
写作文其实是积累的过程 不难的 加油
第4个回答  2011-03-26
你可以平常多练些英语句子,或英语单词、遇到不会的向老师请教