写作思路：写一封邮件，告诉老师最近你的情况，把它写下来。
Dear Miss Yuan,
How are you? I am Tonny. It is hot this summer holiday. Are you reading this at home?
Now, I am in Hong Kong. I'd like to give you my e-mail.
Hong Kong is not as big as Shanghai, but it is a modern and beautiful place. It's very busy in the street. I can also see many tall buildings. They're always bright at night.
I like Disney Land best. I can see many cartoon characters there like Donald Duck, Mickey Mouse, Snow White and so on. I want to stay in Disney Land longer, but the airplane will not wait for us. I have to say goodbye to my Disney friends.
I want to tell you more, when I meet you in the new term.
Your student Tonny
亲爱的袁老师，
你好吗？我是托尼。这个暑假很热。你在家里读书吗？
现在，我在香港。我想给你我的电子邮件。
香港没有上海那么大，但它是一个现代和美丽的地方。这是非常繁忙的街道。我还可以看到许多高层建筑。他们总是在夜晚明亮。
我最喜欢迪斯尼的土地。我可以看到许多卡通人物有像唐纳德，米老鼠，白雪公主等。我想留在迪斯尼的土地更长，但飞机不会等待我们。我不得不跟我的迪斯尼朋友说再见。
我想告诉你更多，当我在新学期遇见你。
你的学生托尼
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一般注意事项：
不要做缩写。比如doesn't要写成does not
文章开门见山，不用寒暄太多。
一定采用书面语言，比如收到写成receive，不用got
不要在句尾轻易用感叹号，注意标点符号的使用。逗号句号后面一定空格。
写完全文要写落款：sincerely加上逗号然后再在一行的开写上你的名字
名字就是自己的英文名（如果对方已经知道你的英文名字）如果给陌生的外国人发邮件的话，就是名字的拼音。比如张小明就是Xiaoming Zhang
另外邮件的名称一定改成标题或者加上名字。以表示尊重，也不会轻易被当作垃圾邮件。
[Name]
[Company]
[Address]
[City, State ZIP]
Dear [ ]
[Zeus Shoes] would like to take this time to offer to our business partners, our sincere good wishes for the holidays.
The holidays give us a reason for reflection. We look back on the successes of the past year and look ahead to plans for the new one.
As we've worked together this past year to reach our mutual goals, we look forward to the new year in hopes that it will bring us both new opportunities and avenues for cooperation.
Happy holidays to you and your employees.
Sincerely,
[Name]
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