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Question

i'm a senior 3 student who take the college entrance exam soon . now i have a problem in choosing my major. my parents want me to study international business . Therefore,my head teacher suggests that i chose software engineering . As for me,I hace a total different idea from them. I want to take environmental science for my major so that i can ase that i hace learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation. But can i possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher ? I'm writing to you for my opinion. Would you please spare some time to give me some advices ?

Answer 1

I'm a [high school senior] student who [is going to take] the college entrance exam soon. I [am facing] a problem in choosing my major. My parents want me to study international business, [however] my head teacher [suggested] that I [choose] software engineering. As for me, I [have] a [totally] different idea.

I want to take environmental science [as] my major so that I can [use what I have] learned to help improve the environment [of] my hometown [upon] graduation. But can I [really] make [the] decision on my own[,] against the will of my parents and my teacher?

I'm writing to you for [your] opinion. Would you please spare some time to give me some [advice]?

Answer 2

i'm a senior 3 student. I am now waiting to take the college entrance exam. Iam facing a problem in choosing my major. My parents want me to study international business . However, my teacher incharge suggested that i choose software engineering. As for me,I have a total different idea from them. I would like myself to be in the environmental science. This is because, I have a dream to contribute myself in improving the environment in my hometown after my graduation. Hence, may i possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher? Above are all my sincere opinion. Would you please spare some time to give me some advices ?

Answer 3

i'm a senior 3 student who (加上will) take the college entrance exam soon . now i have a problem in choosing my major. my parents want me to study international business . (Therefore改为but) my head teacher suggests that i （chose改为原型choose） software engineering . As for me,I have a （total改为totally） different idea from them. I want to take environmental science for my major so that i can ase that i have learned to help improving the environment in my hometown after the graduation. But can i possibly make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher ? I'm writing to you for （my改为your） opinion. Would you please spare some time to give me some （advices改为advice） ?

Answer 4

I'm a senior high school student in grade 3 who is going to take the college entrance exam soon . Now i have a problem in choosing my major. my parents want me to study International Business . Therefore,my headteacher suggests that i shall chose software engineering . As for me,I have a totally different. I want to take environmental science as my major so that i can use that i have learned to help improve the environment in my hometown after the graduation. But can i make a decision on my own against the will of my parents and my teacher successfully? I'm here writing to you to ask for some opinions. Would you please spare some time to give me some advices ?