2011年泉州中考英语作文,帮我估分。题目BELIEVE IN MYSELF ,词数80 满分15

Believe in myself Believing in myself is my first step on the road to success .Never shall I forget what it has done for me . No matter what difficulties I face , I always believe in myself and make a plan to help me solve the problem easier . No matter when I face trouble , I always believe in myself and never give up , because nothing is difficult to a willing heart . NO matter how strong my enemies are , I always believe myself and try my best to beat them . believe in myself , so that I can fly higher and higher to realize my dream . 有一处涂改,估个具体的分。
满分十五,哪来的十八。

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第1个回答  2012-04-30
评语: 文章行文连贯,文中连接词和过渡词稍欠丰富,内容基本连贯;能熟练使用长难句,文中的长短句搭配合理,此外文中句式变化多样,希望继续努力,再创佳绩;文中用词稍欠丰富,同时未发现学术词汇的使用,作者在拼写方面做得很棒;建议本文在结构上增加一个引言段或一个结尾段。
大约12~13分吧
第2个回答  2011-07-02
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第3个回答  2011-07-03
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