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Question

假如你叫Jack，参加了你们学校开展的“有烦恼向谁说”（To Whom You Go When in Trouble)的调查（survey)活动，调查结果：向同学、朋友说7/12 向家长、老师说1/3 自己独自解决1/12。请用英语给校报编辑（editor）写一封信，内容包括：调查结果（不局限于用分数表达）、理由及自己的想法。字数不少于60词

Answer 1

我帮你从百度里搜了：
最近学校在高中学生中做 了一次“有烦恼向谁说”To whom do you go when in trouble?”的调查活动, 调查结果如图所示. 请你简要描述调查结果, 并谈谈你自己的想法和理由.
A survey held in a school shows that students tend to go to their classmates or friends instead of their teachers or parents when they are in trouble. And only a few students will eliminate the worry by themselves.
What caused it? Why don’t the students go to their teachers or parents first when in trouble? It seems to be very strange, doesn’t it? However, I can understand them somehow. First, there may be a generation gap between students and their parents. Second, students can communicate with their classmates more freely than the teachers. Third, the teenagers are not strong enough to be faced with difficulties alone. All of the above are the reasons.
In my opinion, we can have more confidence in our parents. We can share our vacation and happiness with our teachers. Because they have a great deal of experience, and they are always willing to give us a helping hand.
For the reasons given above, I feel that we are supposed to communicate with our parents and teachers more often. After all, they love us at the bottom of their heart.

Recently, a survey has been made among senior school students, the topic of which is “To whom do you go when in trouble?”. According to the figure, 58% of students choose to go their school mates and friends when in trouble, compared with 33% to teachers and parents, and 9% by oneself.
From my point of view, it reflect the realistic situation in a way. Schoolmates and friends seem to be more worth trusting. The reasons are as follows. Above all, we usually feel relaxed in front of them, which leads to a more equal and honest conversation. By contrast, when facing teachers and parents we often hide some part of the truth, for fear of being blamed.

Besides, our schoolmates, friends and us are of the same age, so that many of our troubles are in common. The suggestions from them may be more practical, for they may have experienced a same trouble. However, solving troubles all by oneself is much more likely to go to the extreme and may keep you isolated from your fellows.
To conclude, I think it an effective way to go to schoolmates and friends when in trouble. Communication is important and essential. It reminds us that we are not alone in the world. Next time you are in trouble, don’t hesitate to turn to your schoolmates and friends. Maybe a solution is right around the corner.
“Recently, an survey about to who you go when you in trouble was made in some high school students. The chart shows us that most students tell their trouble to their classmates or friends. Many students go to their teachers and parents when in trouble, and only a small part deal with the problems by themselves.”

“The pie chart has shown that more than half of the students prefer to talk to friends and classmates when they are in trouble. Talking to teachers or parents takes up the second place, while only nine percent choose to handle the trouble on their own.”
“A survey on “To whom you go when you in trouble” has been carried out recently in a high school. The result of it shows that 58% of the students surveyed turn to their classmates or friends for help, while those who ask their teachers and parents for help account for 33%. Only 9 percent of the students can settle the problems on their own.”
1. “According to the pie chart, we can see that most …
2.We can easily communicate with a friend in the same age.
3.My reasons are as follow/ following
4.Firstly, Second, Last, At last,Last but not the least
5.An investigation was made …
6.To have a part-time job, they can promote their ability of taking care of themselves.
1.Part-time job is sure to influence their study.
2.Through working outside, the students can know that the society is.
3.They also can pick up some knowledge which can not be learned in the class.
我帮你找来了翻译文：
在学校举行的一项调查表明，学生往往去他们的同学或朋友而不是教师或他们的父母在他们困难的时候。只有少数学生会消除烦恼自己。
是什么造成的？学生们为何不去他们的老师或父母第一次当麻烦吗？这似乎很奇怪，不是吗？然而，我能理解他们。首先，有可能是学生和家长之间的代沟。其次，学生可以与他们沟通的同学更自由，比教师。第三、青少年没有强大到足以面临困难的。以上所有的原因。
在我看来，我们可以比较有信心在我们的父母。我们可以把我们的假期和幸福与我们的老师。因为他们有不少经验，他们总是愿意给我们帮忙。
由于上述原因，我觉得我们应该与我们的父母和老师更频繁。毕竟，他们爱我们在底部的心。
最近，调查了高中学生，题目是“谁做你去当麻烦吗？”。根据图中，58%的学生选择去他们的同学和朋友有困难的时候，有33%的教师和家长，和9%的自己。
从我的角度来看，它反映了现实情况的方式。同学和朋友们似乎更值得信赖。原因如下。首先，我们通常感觉轻松的在他们面前，从而导致更平等和诚实的对话。相反，当面对教师和家长往往隐藏一些真理的一部分，害怕被指责。
此外，我们的同学、朋友和我们有相同的年龄，因此，我们的许多问题是共同的。他们的建议可能更实用，因为他们可能已经经历了同样的麻烦。然而，所有由自己解决问题更有可能走向极端，可以让你从你的同伴。
最后，我觉得这是一个有效的方式去同学和朋友有困难的时候。沟通是非常重要和必要的。它提醒我们，我们不是孤独的世界。下次你有麻烦了，不要犹豫，把你的同学和朋友。也许是一个解决方案是正确的每个角落。
最近，一个调查谁去当你麻烦的是在一些高中学生。图表显示，大多数学生告诉他们的麻烦，他们的同学或朋友。许多学生在老师和家长有困难的时候，只有一小部分解决问题本身。”
“饼图显示，超过一半的学生喜欢和朋友和同学遇到困难的人们。谈论老师或家长占据了亚军，而只有百分之九个选择处理麻烦自己。”
“调查”的人，你去当你麻烦”已进行了最近在一个高中。结果显示，58%的受访学生向他们的同学或朋友的帮助，而那些谁问他们的老师和父母的帮助的占33%。只有百分之9的学生能解决他们自己的问题。”
1.根据饼图，我们可以看到，最…
2.we可以很容易沟通，与朋友在同一时代。
3.my原因如下/后
4。首先，其次，最后，最后，最后但并非最不重要的
5.an调查了…
6.to有兼职，他们可以促进他们的能力照顾自己。
1.part-time工作肯定会影响他们的学习。
2.through工作外，学生可以了解社会。
3.they还可以挑选一些知识，不能在课堂上学习的。

可能有点多，但你根据中文可以进行适当截取。希望能帮助到您！

Answer 2

Dear Editor,
I am a student in Grade Three. We have made a survey “ To whom you go when in trouble” .Here are the results. Most of the students will go to their classmates or friends when in trouble because they’re almost of the same age. They can talk with, communicate with and understand each other easily. Some students will tell their parents or teachers about their troubles as the teachers or parents have rich experience and love them very much. They can be trusted by these students. Only a few students solve their problems all by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with others. They have few friends.
In my opinion, when in trouble we’d better ask our teachers, parents or classmates for help.
Yours sincerely,
Zhao Bin本回答被提问者采纳